[CCWG-ACCT] Note re AoC commitments between WP1 and WP2

[Burr, Becky]

Can someone send me the WP1v4 language on AoC??
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From: Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz<mailto:jordan at internetnz.net.nz>>
Date: Friday, April 17, 2015 at 5:02 PM
To: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>
Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Note re AoC commitments between WP1 and WP2

Hi all

Becky and I have just spoken as WP2 and 1 rapporteurs about the location in the comment document of updates to the Core Values of ICANN that would take into account the commitments ICANN made in the Affirmation of Commitments.

Both Working Parties have been doing some of this work. Becky's group in WP2 has done a more thorough re-write of the principles and values; WP1 colleagues tabulated the AoC commitments and proposed wording.

Since Becky's editing work and rethinking is more advanced, this is how we'll deal with it for the purposes of the document freeze:

- Becky will review our WP1 v4 content and incorporate any insights into the final proposal she makes for the "Freeze" - this is in the "Fundamental Commitments and Core Values" Section of WP2 work

- I will move our table about these commitments out of the body of our WP1 content, and lodge it as an appendix. This is so the text is all there, and when we do our meetings next week, everyone can cross-check Becky's incorporation job against what WP1 had done.

When we discuss it in the full CCWG, it will be likely that Becky will lead that discussion, but I anticipate that Matthew, Avri, Steve, Fiona et al who did that translation work in WP1 will be key contributors to that discussion.


Thanks everyone. Good luck with the sprints.

cheers
Jordan

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