[CCWG-ACCT] Fwd: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3

Greg Shatan gregshatanipc at gmail.com
Mon Apr 20 19:46:04 UTC 2015


All,

As previewed in my earlier email, a further revised draft of the CWG draft
report has now been circulated on that list.  A copy of that email and
attachments is below.

Greg SHatan
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From: Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
Date: Mon, Apr 20, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>


 Dear All,

 Please find attached an updated draft which now incorporates, amongst
others, a summary for section III, DT X, information from the legal memo,
updates as a result of comments received and proposed text for section
IIIB. Note that we’ve also reorganised the annexes to match the flow of the
document.

 *Please note that that there a number of comments that have been flagged
that need further consideration by the different DTs. We would like to
encourage the leads of the DTs to pick up on the items that have been
flagged for review and provide feedback on those items to the CWG mailing
list as soon as possible.*

 Also, note that we’ve incorporated those edits and/or comments that we
considered corrections and/or clarifications of existing content as well as
responses to some of the Sidley comments. If you do not agree with those
responses or updates or are of the view that these are more than
corrections and/or clarifications, please flag those accordingly.

 You are encouraged to flag any items that you think warrant CWG
consideration by Tuesday 20 April at 16.00 UTC at the latest. Other minor
edits and/or clarifications can be submitted until Tuesday 20 April 23.59
UTC.

 For your convenience I’ve attached a redline and clean version both in
Word as well as pdf.

 Thanks again for all your feedback!

 Marika

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