[CCWG-ACCT] [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work

James Gannon james at cyberinvasion.net
Thu Jul 30 19:45:18 UTC 2015


The redline on Jordans PDF looks normal to me I think...

-James from my phone so cant look at the .doc

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From: wp2-bounces at icann.org <wp2-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Burr, Becky <Becky.Burr at neustar.biz>
Sent: 30 July 2015 20:20
To: Malcolm Hutty; Jordan Carter; Accountability Cross Community
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Subject: Re: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work

Not what I¹m seeing malcolm

J. Beckwith Burr
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz






On 7/30/15, 3:17 PM, "Malcolm Hutty" <malcolm at linx.net> wrote:

>No, that doesn't seem right. I think you may have got the version
>control the wrong way round: crossing out what was added and showing
>what was deleted.
>
>This can happen when you do Document Compare in Word, but get the
>"original" and "new" documents reversed.
>
>On 30/07/2015 20:00, Jordan Carter wrote:
>> I have PDF'd Becky's redline just sent, and reattach the Word and send
>> to the CCWG as well as back to WP2
>>
>> On 31 July 2015 at 06:54, Burr, Becky <Becky.Burr at neustar.biz
>> <mailto:Becky.Burr at neustar.biz>> wrote:
>>
>>
>>     J. Beckwith Burr____
>>
>>     *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy
>>Officer____
>>
>>     1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006____
>>
>>     Office: + 1.202.533.2932 <tel:%2B%201.202.533.2932>  Mobile:
>>     +1.202.352.6367 <tel:%2B1.202.352.6367>  / becky.burr at neustar.biz
>>     <mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz
>>     <http://www.neustar.biz>
>>
>>
>>     From: <Burr>, Becky Burr <becky.burr at neustar.biz
>>     <mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz>>
>>     Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 12:48 PM
>>     To: "wp2 at icann.org <mailto:wp2 at icann.org>" <wp2 at icann.org
>>     <mailto:wp2 at icann.org>>
>>     Cc: Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard at gmail.com
>>     <mailto:turcotte.bernard at gmail.com>>, "grace.abuhamad at icann.org
>>     <mailto:grace.abuhamad at icann.org>" <grace.abuhamad at icann.org
>>     <mailto:grace.abuhamad at icann.org>>
>>     Subject: IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our
>>work
>>
>>     With huge apologies for late delivery, I¹ve attached a draft of the
>>     report text revised to reflect our decisions.  I am willing to put
>>     the draft bylaws language in the report as an appendix, but I don¹t
>>     think its fully cooked right now.
>>
>>
>>     J. Beckwith Burr____
>>
>>     *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy
>>Officer____
>>
>>     1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006____
>>
>>     Office: + 1.202.533.2932 <tel:%2B%201.202.533.2932>  Mobile:
>>     +1.202.352.6367 <tel:%2B1.202.352.6367>  / becky.burr at neustar.biz
>>     <mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz
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>>
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