[CCWG-ACCT] IRP text following call with Malcolm

[Greg Shatan]

My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's
changes.  Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.

Greg

On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM, Malcolm Hutty <malcolm at linx.net> wrote:

> On 2015-07-30 22:07, Burr, Becky wrote:
>
>> Sending again
>>
>
> Thank you again Becky.
>
> Best,
>
> Malcolm.
>
>
>  J. Beckwith Burr
>>
>> NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
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>>  From: <Burr>, Becky Burr <becky.burr at neustar.biz>
>>  Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 4:20 PM
>>  To: Accountability Community
>> <accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>>  Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] FW: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report
>> revised to reflect our work
>>
>> These are the current docs
>>
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>>
>> NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>>
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
>>
>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 /
>> becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz
>>
>>
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