[CCWG-ACCT] Update of document on definition & scope

[Robin Gross]

Hello Mathieu,

Thanks very much for this excellent document.  I've made a few suggested edits in the redlined version (attached).

Thanks,
Robin

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On Mar 5, 2015, at 5:54 AM, Mathieu Weill wrote:

> Dear Colleagues,
> 
> As you will remember, our draft document was circulated to the Advisors for feedback after our meeting in Frankfurt. You will find the latest version attached, both in edit as well as clean mode.
> 
> The document has benefitted from substantial and very well documented input from Advisors, and I believe it now provides a solid basis for our future report and call for comments. In the name of the co-chairs, I want to express our gratitude to all contributors.
> 
> The various versions will be added to the Wiki shortly.
> 
> Best,
> 
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