[CCWG-ACCT] comment: CCWG - Executive Summary

[Matthew Shears]

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On 10/11/2015 12:54, Dr. Tatiana Tropina wrote:
> Hello
> I already made a comment on the chat during CCWG call today, making it 
> here again.
> I think the human rights language in the summary is a bit confusing. 
> "Reinforcing Adherence to Human Rights Protocols" (pages 7, 8, 31) is 
> not exactly what WP4 proposed. The word "protocols" makes no sense in 
> this context, it will be good either for diplomatic language or for 
> IETF, but not for the CCWG document. As far as I am concerned, we are 
> not suggesting to commit to any "protocols", furthermore, we even 
> decided not to suggest to mention any instruments. Even within the 
> context of international human rights law mentioning "protocols" 
> doesn't make any sense.
> I believe just "human rights" or "internationally recognised human 
> rights" would be much better wording. But not "protocols" because it 
> is confusing.
> Best regards
> Tanya
>
> On 09/11/15 22:42, Bernard Turcotte wrote:
>> All,
>>
>> Please find attached the first full draft of the executive summary 
>> which will be discussed on the call tomorrow.
>>
>> Apologies for the delay in getting this out but people have been 
>> working almost around the clock.
>>
>> Bernard Turcotte
>> Staff Support
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