[CCWG-ACCT] comment: CCWG - Executive Summary

[Greg Shatan]

In the comments I submitted, I proposed a number of specific textual changes
to address this.

I look forward to seeing the second draft. We are going to see a second
draft, aren't we??? I hope.....

On Thursday, November 12, 2015, Niels ten Oever <lists at digitaldissidents.org>
wrote:

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> Niels
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> On 11/10/2015 03:43 PM, Robin Gross wrote:
> > I agree with Dr. Tropina on the incorrect HR language in the
> > summary. It will lead to confusion that ICANN is signing up to
> > adhere to some protocols and that has never been part of the plan
> > of this group.  That confusion will cause much larger problems in
> > the future.  Let's fix that language as she suggests.
> >
> > Thanks, Robin
> >
> > On Nov 10, 2015, at 5:54 AM, Dr. Tatiana Tropina wrote:
> >
> >> Hello I already made a comment on the chat during CCWG call
> >> today, making it here again. I think the human rights language in
> >> the summary is a bit confusing. "Reinforcing Adherence to Human
> >> Rights Protocols" (pages 7, 8, 31) is not exactly what WP4
> >> proposed. The word "protocols" makes no sense in this context, it
> >> will be good either for diplomatic language or for IETF, but not
> >> for the CCWG document. As far as I am concerned, we are not
> >> suggesting to commit to any "protocols", furthermore, we even
> >> decided not to suggest to mention any instruments. Even within
> >> the context of international human rights law mentioning
> >> "protocols" doesn't make any sense. I believe just "human rights"
> >> or "internationally recognised human rights" would be much better
> >> wording. But not "protocols" because it is confusing. Best
> >> regards Tanya
> >>
> >> On 09/11/15 22:42, Bernard Turcotte wrote:
> >>> All,
> >>>
> >>> Please find attached the first full draft of the executive
> >>> summary which will be discussed on the call tomorrow.
> >>>
> >>> Apologies for the delay in getting this out but people have
> >>> been working almost around the clock.
> >>>
> >>> Bernard Turcotte Staff Support
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> >>> for the co-chairs.
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