[CCWG-ACCT] 17 UTC deadline for final edits

[Matthew Shears]

Hi Alice

W/r/t this on page 21:

The CCWG-Accountability is yet to reach consensus on the proposed 
language that is intended to
address contract enforcement and regulation: [PLACEHOLDER: Without in 
any way limiting the
foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services that 
use the Internet's unique
identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide. ICANN 
shall have the ability to enforce
agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of 
community input on those
agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose 
obligations exceeding ICANN’s
Mission on registries and registrars.]

Could we be clearer as follows: first putting the agreed text from 
proposal v2 and then the caveat given that we have no agreement on a 
variation on that text as of yet.  Our approach so far has been to refer 
to or look back to existing agreed text.

    Without in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition,
    ICANN shall not regulate services that use the Internet's unique
    identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide.
    ICANN shall have the ability to enforce
    agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of
    community input on those
    agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to
    impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s
    Mission on registries and registrars.

    /Note: The CCWG Accountability is continuing discussions on contract
    enforcement and regulation, in particular as relates to comments
    from proposal v2. /


On 13/11/2015 13:40, Alice Jansen wrote:
> Dear all,
> As announced on your call #67, this is to kindly remind you that final 
> edits on the attached draft Formal Update (circulated on 12 November) 
> are needed by _*17:00 UTC today*._
> As indicated on the call, no line edits will be taken into account. 
> Co-Chairs are asking for content related comments.
> Per the note below, any format, font and proofreading issues are being 
> addressed by a professional writer.
> Thank you,
> Best regards
> Alice
> From: Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard at gmail.com 
> <mailto:turcotte.bernard at gmail.com>>
> Date: Friday, November 13, 2015 12:04 AM
> To: "accountability-cross-community at icann.org 
> <mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>" 
> <accountability-cross-community at icann.org 
> <mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>
> Subject: CCWG - Draft Update document for CCWG call
>
> All,
>
> As per Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft Proposal 
> Update document which will be discussed at the next CCWG meeting.
>
> The document is going to professional formatting as we speak - so any 
> issues of layout, fonts etc. will be addressed by a specialist.
>
> This document also represents a consideration of all the comments 
> received with respect to the previous version - not that all of these 
> were accepted, but a majority were taken on.
>
> We apologize for the lateness of the document, but as you will notice 
> we have put significant efforts into recasting this per the comments.
>
> Bernard Turcotte
> ICANN Staff Support for the CCWG
>
> for the CCWG Co-chairs.
>
>
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Matthew Shears
Director - Global Internet Policy and Human Rights
Center for Democracy & Technology
mshears at cdt.org
+ 44 771 247 2987



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