[CCWG-ACCT] 17 UTC deadline for final edits

[Alan Greenberg]

If there is a reasonable chance that something 
will change, the update needs to say so, even if 
it includes the words of the earlier document.

At 13/11/2015 12:03 PM, avri doria wrote:
>I support keeping the current language. Our 
>normal practice is that until there is a new 
>consensus the old consensus stands.
>
>Alternatively +1
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>avri
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>-------- Original message --------
>From: Malcolm Hutty <malcolm at linx.net>
>Date:11/13/2015 1:28 PM (GMT-03:00)
>To: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org>
>Cc: acct-staff at icann.org, accountability-cross-community at icann.org
>Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] 17 UTC deadline for final edits
>
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>On 13 Nov 2015, at 11:40, Alice Jansen 
><<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>alice.jansen at icann.org> wrote:
>
>>As announced on your call #67, this is to 
>>kindly remind you that final edits on the 
>>attached draft Formal Update (circulated on 12 
>>November) are needed by 17:00 UTC today.
>>As indicated on the call, no line edits will be 
>>taken into account. Co-Chairs are asking for content related comments.
>>Per the note below, any format, font and 
>>proofreading issues are being addressed by a professional writer.
>>Thank you,
>
>Dear Alice,
>
>I just wanted to check you'd received the 
>message copied below and understood it as responsive to this call,
>
>Kind Regards,
>
>Malcolm
>
>
>>On 12/11/2015 23:04, Bernard Turcotte wrote:
>>All,
>>
>>As per Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft Proposal
>>Update document which will be discussed at the next CCWG meeting.
>
>There has been a major, unacceptable change between the last revision of
>this document and this one.
>
>Concerning the Mission, the previous revision said, on page 30
>
>The CCWG-Accountability recommends clarifying ICANN’s Mission and Core
>Values to:
>* Reinforce the scope of ICANN’s organizational activities related to
>the Domain Name System (DNS)
>- ICANN is not to regulate services that use the Internet's unique
>identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide.
>- ICANN is to have the ability to enforce agreements with contracted
>parties (entities that have signed agreements with ICANN in relation to
>top level domain names)
>
>That fairly reflected the decision recommendation from the previous
>draft, at least at the level of detail that appears in this document.
>
>The new revision just released removes those statements, and in their
>place says merely
>
>"The CCWG-Accountability is yet to reach consensus on the proposed
>language that is intended to address contract enforcement and
>regulation."  (page 21)
>
>That is not correct. The existing recommendation from our previous draft
>Report remains intact until replaced. There has been nothing remotely
>like a consensus to remove it. Please revert to the previous statement.
>
>Based on Greg's most recent e-mail, of just a couple of hours ago, I
>think there are grounds for optimism that there WILL be a broadly based
>consensus to replace the previous text with his new suggestion.
>
>But if that fails, the fall-back is the existing text, not no text at
>all. The CCWG's existing recommendation remains until we have consensus
>to change it.
>
>It is essential that we follow proper process here, especially on such a
>crucial issue.
>
>Malcolm.
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