[CCWG-ACCT] Jan-Aart Scholte comments - Third Draft Proposal with annexes - First full version for CCWG comments

[Alice Jansen]

FYI - please find attached comments Jan Aart Scholte shared with Co-Chairs on Monday, 23 November.
Kind regards
Alice
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