[CCWG-ACCT] High Level Review of Jones Day Analysis from Sidley/Adler

[Jordan Carter]

Thanks Alice for sending this around, and thank you to the legal team for
the quick turnaround and high quality work.

I would ask that any future material from lawyers - whoever they are
working for - adopts such a commendably brief way of explaining their key
points. I suspect that many of us, with normal commitments, cannot wade
through endless tables and complicated documents.

As for the substantive content, to me this note clearly identifies that the
CCWG has work to do in explaining its material more clearly and concisely.
We have, I fear, got lost in the detail and in some areas, achieved the
worst of both worlds: a long and hard-to-read report that isn't clear and
concrete enough in some areas.

I am of course more than happy to take my share of the responsibility for
that!

It does bear on the question we discussed at our most recent meeting. What
do we want our final report to look like? How do we go about shortening it
(if we want it to be shorter) and clarifying it (presuming we want to be
clear)? At the same time, how do we accessibly provide the detail we need
so that things are all tied down and implementable?

cheers
Jordan


On 2 September 2015 at 02:03, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org> wrote:

> Dear all,
> Please find attached legal counsel's high level review of the Jones Day
> Impact Analysis.
> The memo is available on the wiki at:
> https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Responses+to+CCWG-Accountability+Requests
> For full reference, the Jones Day Impact Analysis can be found at:
> http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ccwg-accountability-03aug15/msg00007.html
> Thanks
> Best
> Alice
>
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