[CCWG-ACCT] Final version - chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

[Burr, Becky]

In response to Kavouss’ formatting request, I have attached a redline showing the proposed changes from the existing Bylaws provisions.  Please note that the texts are not organized in the way, so to make the comparison meaningful, I had to re-order the text to insure that the proper language was being compared.  I apologize if that is unsatisfactory Kavouss, it’s the best I can offer.


J. Beckwith Burr
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  / becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz

From: Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com<mailto:kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>>
Date: Tuesday, September 1, 2015 at 4:38 PM
To: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>
Cc: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>
Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Final version - chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

Dear All,
I have not checked the doc. because it is not checkable.
Standard procedure is that the initial texts are placed in one column and the amendemnets in the second column BUT WITH REVISION MARKS and NOT AS CLEAN TEXT
SORRY IT IS NOT  WORKABLE TO CHECK WORD BY WORD AND LIONE BY LINE
REGARDS
Kavouss

2015-09-01 15:45 GMT+02:00 Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>:
Dear all,
Please find attached the final version of the synopsis Becky prepared.
The document can also be found on your second draft proposal wiki page at https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=53783460<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D53783460&d=AwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=0F-J4fpf-Z2kInCQkNKuVwROn4MhE-qiP9KBdAtUAtA&s=kGRfEszyZWyrFFpIyt3_pARqOSFUgYIwV2_Llzdfu4c&e=>
We will have a link to the chart added to the public comment period box - https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-draft-proposal-2015-05-04-en<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_public-2Dcomments_ccwg-2Daccountability-2Ddraft-2Dproposal-2D2015-2D05-2D04-2Den&d=AwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=0F-J4fpf-Z2kInCQkNKuVwROn4MhE-qiP9KBdAtUAtA&s=tdEQl7sGEdhsLvxJ32NEi60nj8U9sJa-uSMlcoQZVrg&e=>.
Thanks
Best
Alice

From: "Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch<mailto:Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>" <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch<mailto:Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>>
Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2015 5:02 PM
To: "Becky.Burr at neustar.biz<mailto:Becky.Burr at neustar.biz>" <Becky.Burr at neustar.biz<mailto:Becky.Burr at neustar.biz>>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>, "accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>" <accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>
Subject: AW: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

Dear Beck,

many thanks for your prompt and responsive answer. I feel many will benefit from this added explanations.

Regards

Jorge

Von: Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr at neustar.biz]
Gesendet: Mittwoch, 26. August 2015 15:59
An: Cancio Jorge BAKOM <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch<mailto:Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>>; alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>; accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
Betreff: Re: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

Dear Jorge,

I will attempt to insert an explanatory column this morning.

Becky
J. Beckwith Burr
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
Office: + 1.202.533.2932<tel:%2B%201.202.533.2932>  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367<tel:%2B1.202.352.6367>  / becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz>

From: "Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch<mailto:Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>" <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch<mailto:Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>>
Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 1:43 AM
To: Becky Burr <becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz>>, "alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>" <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>, Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>
Subject: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

Dear Becky,

Thank you very much for this very useful comparison.

I wonder whether a third column with an objective impact assessment of the changes would be available, in order to better understand what each and every change intends to achieve specifically and what impact this would have on current ICANN activities and operations.

If this would to be done I would recommend that the explanation is inserted directly into the column and that we refrain from just inserting references to sections in the report as this makes the reading and understanding of the changes much more difficult.

In addition to the foregoing, perhaps it would be useful to extend this comparison to any other specific Bylaw changes proposed in the Report, in order to benefit from a complete picture of what is being proposed at this level in one single document.

Best regards,

Jorge Cancio


Von:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org> [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org<mailto:-bounces at icann.org>] Im Auftrag von Burr, Becky
Gesendet: Dienstag, 25. August 2015 22:31
An: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>; accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
Betreff: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

I’ve put together a chart with the requested comparison.  Hope it helps.  Alice, I assume someone will post as appropriate

Thanks,

Becky

J. Beckwith Burr
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
Office: + 1.202.533.2932<tel:%2B%201.202.533.2932>  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367<tel:%2B1.202.352.6367>  / becky.burr at neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz>

From: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>
Date: Monday, August 24, 2015 at 5:04 PM
To: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community at icann.org>>
Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Call with advisors

Dear all,

This is to inform you that as part of your outreach and public comment process, a call will be held on Monday, 31 August - 13:00-14:00 UTC to collect CCWG-Accountability Advisors' input on the Second Draft Proposal.

May we also take this opportunity to remind you that your third webinar is scheduled for tomorrow – Tuesday, 25 August – 18:00-20:00 UTC – see https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-08-17-en<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_news_announcement-2D2015-2D08-2D17-2Den&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=K8FtNNpGHlaPf7ETYlJuJgAQePUzQkTolyXPGDRrr0I&e=> for details.

Webinar Q&As on your second draft proposal are compiled on a wiki page at: https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=54695403<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D54695403&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=Kz0jkM7qEYKZq1RnxhMHR3_B-Nzuy6kOCTetvVBKq38&e=>

Thank you,

Kind regards

Alice

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