[CCWG-ACCT] Final version - chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values

Wed Sep 2 20:48:40 UTC 2015

Dear Becky
Dear Leon,
Thanks to becky for her kind attention and useful revisions
Regards
Kavouss

2015-09-02 17:06 GMT+02:00 León Felipe Sánchez Ambía <leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>
:

> Dear Becky,
>
> Thank you very much for taking the time for addressing Kavouss’ concern.
>
>
> Kavouss,
>
> I hope this helps you and others in the group.
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
> León
>
> El 02/09/2015, a las 9:49, Burr, Becky <Becky.Burr at neustar.biz> escribió:
>
> In response to Kavouss’ formatting request, I have attached a redline
> showing the proposed changes from the existing Bylaws provisions.  Please
> note that the texts are not organized in the way, so to make the comparison
> meaningful, I had to re-order the text to insure that the proper language
> was being compared.  I apologize if that is unsatisfactory Kavouss, it’s
> the best I can offer.
>
>
> J. Beckwith Burr
> *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
> becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz
>
> From: Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com>
> Date: Tuesday, September 1, 2015 at 4:38 PM
> To: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org>
> Cc: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
> Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Final version - chart comparing current Mission
> & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
>
> Dear All,
> I have not checked the doc. because it is not checkable.
> Standard procedure is that the initial texts are placed in one column and
> the amendemnets in the second column BUT WITH REVISION MARKS and NOT AS
> CLEAN TEXT
> SORRY IT IS NOT  WORKABLE TO CHECK WORD BY WORD AND LIONE BY LINE
> REGARDS
> Kavouss
>
> 2015-09-01 15:45 GMT+02:00 Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org>:
>
>> Dear all,
>> Please find attached the final version of the synopsis Becky prepared.
>> The document can also be found on your second draft proposal wiki page at
>> https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=53783460
>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D53783460&d=AwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=0F-J4fpf-Z2kInCQkNKuVwROn4MhE-qiP9KBdAtUAtA&s=kGRfEszyZWyrFFpIyt3_pARqOSFUgYIwV2_Llzdfu4c&e=>
>> We will have a link to the chart added to the public comment period box -
>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-draft-proposal-2015-05-04-en
>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_public-2Dcomments_ccwg-2Daccountability-2Ddraft-2Dproposal-2D2015-2D05-2D04-2Den&d=AwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=0F-J4fpf-Z2kInCQkNKuVwROn4MhE-qiP9KBdAtUAtA&s=tdEQl7sGEdhsLvxJ32NEi60nj8U9sJa-uSMlcoQZVrg&e=>
>> .
>> Thanks
>> Best
>> Alice
>>
>> From: "Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>
>> Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2015 5:02 PM
>> To: "Becky.Burr at neustar.biz" <Becky.Burr at neustar.biz>, Alice Jansen <
>> alice.jansen at icann.org>, "accountability-cross-community at icann.org" <
>> accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>> Subject: AW: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core
>> Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
>>
>> Dear Beck,
>>
>> many thanks for your prompt and responsive answer. I feel many will
>> benefit from this added explanations.
>>
>> Regards
>>
>> Jorge
>>
>> *Von:* Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr at neustar.biz
>> <Becky.Burr at neustar.biz>]
>> *Gesendet:* Mittwoch, 26. August 2015 15:59
>> *An:* Cancio Jorge BAKOM <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>;
>> alice.jansen at icann.org; accountability-cross-community at icann.org
>> *Betreff:* Re: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core
>> Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
>>
>> Dear Jorge,
>>
>> I will attempt to insert an explanatory column this morning.
>>
>> Becky
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
>> becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz
>>
>> *From: *"Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch>
>> *Date: *Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 1:43 AM
>> *To: *Becky Burr <becky.burr at neustar.biz>, "alice.jansen at icann.org" <
>> alice.jansen at icann.org>, Accountability Community <
>> accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>> *Subject: *AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values
>> with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
>>
>> Dear Becky,
>>
>> Thank you very much for this very useful comparison.
>>
>> I wonder whether a third column with an objective impact assessment of
>> the changes would be available, in order to better understand what each and
>> every change intends to achieve specifically and what impact this would
>> have on current ICANN activities and operations.
>>
>> If this would to be done I would recommend that the explanation is
>> inserted directly into the column and that we refrain from just inserting
>> references to sections in the report as this makes the reading and
>> understanding of the changes much more difficult.
>>
>> In addition to the foregoing, perhaps it would be useful to extend this
>> comparison to any other specific Bylaw changes proposed in the Report, in
>> order to benefit from a complete picture of what is being proposed at this
>> level in one single document.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> Jorge Cancio
>>
>>
>> *Von:*accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org [
>> mailto:accountability-cross-community <accountability-cross-community>
>> -bounces at icann.org] *Im Auftrag von *Burr, Becky
>> *Gesendet:* Dienstag, 25. August 2015 22:31
>> *An:* Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org>;
>> accountability-cross-community at icann.org
>> *Betreff:* [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values
>> with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
>>
>> I’ve put together a chart with the requested comparison.  Hope it helps.
>> Alice, I assume someone will post as appropriate
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Becky
>>
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
>> becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz
>>
>> *From: *Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org>
>> *Date: *Monday, August 24, 2015 at 5:04 PM
>> *To: *Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community at icann.org>
>> *Subject: *[CCWG-ACCT] Call with advisors
>>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> This is to inform you that as part of your outreach and public comment
>> process, a call will be held on *Monday, 31 August - 13:00-14:00 UTC *to
>> collect CCWG-Accountability Advisors' input on the Second Draft Proposal.
>>
>> May we also take this opportunity to remind you that your third webinar
>> is scheduled for tomorrow – *Tuesday, 25 August – 18:00-20:00 UTC* – see
>> https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-08-17-en
>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_news_announcement-2D2015-2D08-2D17-2Den&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=K8FtNNpGHlaPf7ETYlJuJgAQePUzQkTolyXPGDRrr0I&e=> for
>> details.
>>
>> Webinar Q&As on your second draft proposal are compiled on a wiki page
>> at: https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=54695403
>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D54695403&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=Kz0jkM7qEYKZq1RnxhMHR3_B-Nzuy6kOCTetvVBKq38&e=>
>>
>> Thank you,
>>
>> Kind regards
>>
>> Alice
>>
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