[CCWG-ACCT] Proposed WHOIS language

[Greg Shatan]

All:

For what it's worth, I prepared track changes comparisons of the following:

CCWG Proposal vs. AoC language
Board Proposal vs. AoC language
Board Proposal vs. CCWG Proposal

These are attached.

Greg

On Thu, Sep 3, 2015 at 11:51 AM, Malcolm Hutty <malcolm at linx.net> wrote:

>
>
> On 03/09/2015 13:27, Bruce Tonkin wrote:
> > Hello Malcolm,
> >
> > On 02/09/2015 02:24, Bruce Tonkin wrote:
> >> ICANN commits to enforcing its policy relating to the current WHOIS
> >> and any future gTLD Directory Service,
> >
> > To be clear - we are not talking about any specific service here with
> any pre-conceived set of requirements.
>
> Indeed. But I did think there was a risk that wording could be
> (mis)interpreted to suggest that we are - and then used to that effect
> when discussing what that future Directory Service might look like.
>
>
> > We are talking about a new service that is established as a result of a
> policy development process in the GNSO.   If it helps you could add the
> text:
> >
> > "any future gTLD DIrectory Service, established via ICANN's bottom up
> policy development process".
>
> I think that would help.
>
> The only point that I'm making is that we aren't trying to pre-empt that
> process or use this insertion into the Bylaws to direct certain outcomes
> from it. On that, I think we're all agreed; it's just a matter of being
> clear in the language we choose.
>
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