[CCWG-ACCT] Suggested text relating to ICANN's role with respect to rood servers

[Kavouss Arasteh]

Dear Erika,Dear Bruce
One possible suggestion would
 be " to contribute"
Regards
Kavousd

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> On 9 Feb 2016, at 10:36, Erika Mann <erika at erikamann.com> wrote:
> 
> Bruce - Can we find a better word than 'participate' for ICANN's function in the operation of the DNS? And I would take out the word 'also'. Maybe 'support' is a more accurate word?
> 
> Thanks, Erika
> 
>> On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 10:18 AM, Bruce Tonkin <Bruce.Tonkin at melbourneit.com.au> wrote:
>> Hello All,
>> 
>> Below is some revised text regarding ICANN scope of responsibilities related to root servers.
>> 
>> The text is not separated into two separate points.   One relates to coordination role and the other relates to the operational role.
>> 
>> ICANN:
>> 
>> 1) "Facilitates coordination of the operation and evolution of the DNS
>> root name server system."
>> 
>> 2) "In its role, ICANN also participates in the operation of DNS root name server system in keeping with
>> ICANN¹s security and stability remit."
>> 
>> Regards,
>> Bruce Tonkin
>> 
>> 
>> 
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