[CCWG-ACCT] report and next steps
grace.abuhamad at icann.org
Tue Feb 23 05:36:41 UTC 2016
Apologies for the delayed response. Wanted to confirm that we (staff) are
proofreading the drafts to correct this error.
On 2/19/16, 6:33 PM, "accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org on
behalf of Andrew Sullivan"
<accountability-cross-community-bounces at icann.org on behalf of
ajs at anvilwalrusden.com> wrote:
>On Wed, Feb 17, 2016 at 10:09:18PM +0100, Thomas Rickert wrote:
>> The revised sections have been posted at
>><https://community.icann.org/x/iw2AAw> for your final review.
>I've reviewed the documents in respect of previous comments, and found
>that the requested corrections were made, save one. Staff, thank you
>for catching all that.
>The one change that is still not quite all there is the "protocols and
>parameters" bit. For instance, I found it on p 37 and p 39 of the
>main report. I think just searching for "protocols and parameters" in
>all the documents may turn up some other examples -- I have not
>checked them all, but given these two there may well be more. The
>"and" should go away.
>ajs at anvilwalrusden.com
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