[CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - V2.0 of comments on draft Bylaws - 24 hour Final Feedback by CCWG-Accountability

[Bernard Turcotte]

All,

Please find attached V2.0 of the CCWG-Accountability comments to be
submitted to the ICANN public consultation on the New Bylaws.

Modifications since V1.0 was circulated (There is no red-line comparison as
too many things have changed. Rather we are providing a high level summary
of changes here and are providing both versions V1.0 and 2.0 for ease of
comparison):


   - V1.0 items 9 and 10 have been removed following consideration of legal
   counsel advice.
      - 9. Draft Bylaws Annex D Section 1.4(b)
      - 10. Draft Bylaws Annex D Section 2.2 (c) (i) (A)
      - V2.0 new item 9 is  - Draft Bylaws Section 1.2(b)(viii) which was
   in the initial comments but not included in V1.0
   - V2.0 new items 10 to 14. These are a selection by the leadership from
   the list of issues submitted by Alan Greenberg this past weekend
      - 10. Draft Bylaws Section 7.12 (b)
      - 11. Draft Bylaws Section 4.6(b)(ii)
      -

      12. Draft Bylaws Section 7.4(d)
      -

      13. Draft Bylaws Section 7.11(a)(i)(B)
      -

      14. Draft Bylaws Annex D, Section 1.4(b)(i-ii)
      - V2.0 New - Conclusion - short recap of Introduction

The Final Feedback period is only intended to provide the
CCWG-Accountability participants the opportunity to confirm there are no
significant issues or gaps in this version and is not intended as an
opportunity to raise new issues.

The Feedback period will begin 20:00UTC today Wednesday May 11th and close
20:00UTC Thursday May 12th.

Please reply to the list using the Subject line of this message to
facilitate identifying your input (or simply REPLY to this email).

The objective of the leadership is to finalize these and submit them before
the weekend.

Documents attached.

Bernard Turcotte
ICANN Staff Support for the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs - Mathieu Weill,
Thomas Rickert, Leon Sanchez
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