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<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jan 15, 2015 at 10:16 AM, Matthew Shears <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:mshears@cdt.org" target="_blank">mshears@cdt.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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Not to belabor this much more, and I may be being pedantic...<br>
<br>
It appears to read as if WS1 is about putting in place mechanisms
that <span lang="EN-US">"provide the community with confidence"</span>
but not specifically about putting in place accountability
mechanisms or measures. There is a big difference between putting
in in place process mechanisms to provide confidence (as it now
seems to imply) and putting in place actual accountability
mechanisms which is what the original definition suggested. The
second definition is fine for so long as it explicitly includes the
first as well. <br>
<br>
It might be better if it read something like:<br>
<br>
<b><span lang="EN-US">Work Stream 1</span></b><span lang="EN-US">:
is focused on mechanisms that 1) enhance ICANN's accountability
and must be in place or committed to within the time frame of the
IANA Stewardship Transition</span>, and 2) <span lang="EN-US">that
provide the community with confidence that any accountability
measures that would further enhance ICANN's accountability would
be implemented if it had consensus support from the community,
even if it were to encounter ICANN management resistance or if it
were against the interest of ICANN as a corporate entity.</span><br>
<br>
Matthew<div><div class="h5"><br>
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<div>On 1/15/2015 10:40 AM, Jordan Carter
wrote:<br>
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<div dir="ltr">I agree with Paul, Mathieu etc - the Charter
language is the skeleton. The language proposed sets out to
characterise why we would select items - i.e. why they have to
be done before the transition.
<div><br>
</div>
<div>We have to set out transparently the criteria we are using
to decide what has to be in place. This language helps do
that. </div>
<div><br>
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<div>best</div>
<div>Jordan</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On 16 January 2015 at 04:17, Kavouss
Arasteh <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span>
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<div><font color="#1f497d"> Dear All,</font></div>
<div><font color="#1f497d">I do not understand who agreed
with whom</font></div>
<div><font color="#1f497d">What has been changed from the
Charter.</font></div>
<div><font color="#1f497d">I personally fully agree with
the following</font></div>
<div><font color="#1f497d">Quote</font></div>
<div><font color="#1f497d">"<strong><em><u> in the absence
“</u></em></strong></font><strong><em><u>mechanisms
[that] would provide the community with confidence
that any accountability mechanism that would
further enhance ICANN's accountability ( in
relation with work stream 1 of CCWG ,for three
distinct areas , Naming, Numbers and Protocols,
including parameter ) could be implemented if it
had consensus support from the community” the IANA
Functions transition should not occur." </u></em></strong></div>
<div><strong><em><u>Unquote</u></em></strong></div>
<span><font color="#888888">
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</u></div>
<div><u>Kavouss </u></div>
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<div>2015-01-15 16:06 GMT+01:00 Edward
Morris <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:emorris@milk.toast.net" target="_blank">emorris@milk.toast.net</a>></span>:<br>
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<div>Paul has eloquently expressed my views in
a manner far superior to anything I could
write. Thanks. </div>
<div> </div>
<div>One could argue that our current system
of accountability and transparency
(reconsideration, Appeal, CEP, IR, DIDP),
with some tweaks, should actually be
sufficient going forward. It looks great: on
paper. The problem is that a system designed
for redress (per Bruce) actually functions
as a system of review (per Robin), and a
rather cursory review system at that. We
simply must have mechanisms designed to
ensure that we have real systems of
accountability, ones that does not rely on
the good faith and open-mindedness of any
particular Board or staff member or group,
in place before the transition can be
allowed to occur. </div>
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Date: Thu, 15 Jan 2015 09:22:26 -0500<br>
Subject: Re: [CCWG-Accountability] Work
Streams definition<br>
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<div class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">Respetful
disagreement. I think the way it
describes types of mechanisms in
the “new” definition is exactly
what needs to be in place before
the Stewardship transition takes
place. Put another way, I think
that the exposition in WS1
precisely describes the
commitments that MUST be made
before a transition is allowed to
occur. More importantly, I think
there is growing consensus across
the community that this is so. To
state it affirmatively – in the
absence “</span>mechanisms [that]
would provide the community with
confidence that any accountability
mechanism that would further
enhance ICANN's accountability would
be implemented if it had consensus
support from the community” the IANA
Functions transition should not
occur.</div>
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<div class="MsoNormal">Paul</div>
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[CCWG-Accountability] Work
Streams definition
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<div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:115%"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" lang="FR">Dear all,</span></div>
<div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:115%"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)" lang="FR"> </span></div>
<div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:115%"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">
I read again the new proposed
definition of the Work Streams,
and I found it too different from
the one in our charter:</span></div>
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</span></div>
<div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:115%"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">
In the charter:</span></div>
<div style="margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="color:rgb(1,1,1);font-family:Symbol"><span>
·<span>
</span></span></span>
<b>Work Stream 1</b>: focused on
mechanisms enhancing ICANN
accountability that must be in place
or committed to within the time
frame of the IANA Stewardship
Transition;<span style="background:white;color:rgb(1,1,1);font-family:"Cambria",serif"></span></div>
<div style="margin-bottom:0pt"><span style="color:rgb(1,1,1);font-family:Symbol"><span>
·<span>
</span></span></span>
<b>Work Stream 2</b>: focused on
addressing accountability topics for
which a timeline for developing
solutions and full implementation
may extend beyond the IANA
Stewardship Transition<span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span><span style="background:white;color:rgb(1,1,1);font-family:"Cambria",serif">
</span></div>
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</span></div>
<div class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:115%"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">
The new proposal:</span></div>
<div style="background:white;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:0pt;margin-left:35.45pt"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span>
</span></span></span>
<b>Work Stream 1</b> mechanisms are
those that, when in place or
committed to, would provide the
community with confidence that any
accountability mechanism that would
further enhance ICANN's
accountability would be implemented
if it had consensus support from the
community, even if it were to
encounter ICANN management
resistance or if it were against the
interest of ICANN as a corporate
entity.
</div>
<div style="background:white;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:0pt;margin-left:35.45pt"><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span>·<span>
</span></span></span>
All other consensus items could be
in <b>Work Stream 2</b>, provided
there are mechanisms in WS1 adequate
to force implementation of WS2 items
despite resistance from ICANN
management and board.</div>
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<div class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">I
don’t believe that we are allowed
to change any part of the charter
without going back to the
chartering organizations and ask
for their approval.</span>
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<div class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">On
the other hand, the separation of
WS 1 and WS 2 was for the purpose
of having the accountability
mechanisms necessary before the
transition done in time, and the
new definition doesn’t satisfy
this requirement </span></div>
<div class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)"> </span>
</div>
<div class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125)">I
would prefer stay with the charter
definition for all those reasons</span></div>
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