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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Editorial comment:<br>
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The first sentence of the Background section could reasonably end
after the word "Government". The subsequent comma and comment
detract from the clarity of the scope statement.<br>
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Eric Brunner-Williams<br>
Eugene, Oregon<br>
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On 1/22/15 5:07 AM, Alice Jansen wrote:<br>
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<div>Dear all,</div>
<div>On behalf of the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs, please find
attached a draft statement (Frankfurt – 19-20 January) for your
consideration.</div>
<div>Please flag any edits and/or comments you may have by<b> today
– Thursday, 22 January - </b><b>17:00 UTC</b>.</div>
<div>Thank you </div>
<div>Best regards</div>
<div>Alice </div>
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