<html><head><base href="x-msg://439/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">I agree that we can delete it from the end of (f) in para 169, BUT the end of (d) where we explain the rationale for Alternative A should then say:<div><br><div>d. "The rationale for Alternative A is that it gives the bulk of influence to the SOs, while guaranteeing a say for the ACs on an equal basis between them. It is therefore more closely aligned with the existing structure of ICANN, <font class="Apple-style-span" color="#e81f13">which is rooted in the private sector</font>."<br><div><br></div><div>So the phrase is descriptive rather than duplicative, and belongs in (d) where the rationale for the suggestion is provided.</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Robin</div><div><br></div><div><br><div><div>On Apr 30, 2015, at 6:22 AM, Tijani BEN JEMAA wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; font-family: Helvetica; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; 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">De :</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif; "><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>[mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b>De la part de</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Thomas Rickert<br><b>Envoyé :</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>jeudi 30 avril 2015 11:45<br><b>À :</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Drazek, Keith<br><b>Cc :</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Accountability Cross Community<br><b>Objet :</b><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Proposed text to add to public comment document<o:p></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">All, <o:p></o:p></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">we had agreed earlier today to just delete the second half of the sentence, so in my view, the „private sector“ term is gone.<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">see para 122 2.f.- the sentence would now read:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><p class="normal1" style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 144pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span lang="EN-AU">a.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size: 7pt; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span lang="EN-AU" style="background-image: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; background-color: yellow; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; ">. It is therefore more closely aligned with the existing structure of ICANN.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class="normal1" style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 144pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span lang="EN-AU" style="background-image: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; background-color: yellow; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "><br><br></span><o:p></o:p></p><p class="normal1" style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 144pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span style="color: rgb(71, 135, 255); background-image: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; background-color: yellow; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; ">and we deleted:</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class="normal1" style="margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 144pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; text-indent: -18pt; "><span lang="EN-AU" style="background-image: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial; background-color: yellow; background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial; "> <b>and in keeping ICANN rooted in the private sector</b>.</span><span class="MsoCommentReference"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 8pt; "> </span></span><o:p></o:p></p></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">I hope that helps,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Thomas<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div><blockquote style="margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt; "><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Am 30.04.2015 um 12:31 schrieb Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>>:<o:p></o:p></div></div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div><div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">I recall we had a lengthy discussion on the term "private sector" during our chartering process for the CCWG. It is not meant to exclude users or governments from participation. In this context, it is used to clarify that the management of assigned names and numbers is "not a governmental function."<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Regards,<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">Keith<o:p></o:p></div></div><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><br>On Apr 30, 2015, at 12:42 AM, Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p></div><blockquote style="margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt; "><div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">I have a real problem with this.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br><br>There is no doubt that the private sector has been a major and influential component since its inception, but it is similarly true that governments and users (albeit in varying models) have been an integral component of ICANN. Our roles may be different, but our roots go as deep, and the import of the public interest in ICANN cannot and should not be swept under the carpet.<br><br>Alan<br><br>At 28/04/2015 08:05 PM, Robin Gross wrote:<br><br><o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">As requested in our call today, below is proposed text for various parts of the draft public comment document.<br><br><b><u>Section 6.6.1.2<br></u></b>p. 54 add to end of (f):<br>"It is therefore more closely aligned with the existing structure of ICANN<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b><i>and in keeping ICANN rooted in the private sector</i></b>."<o:p></o:p></div></div></blockquote><blockquote style="margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt; "><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">_______________________________________________<br>Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><br><br><o:p></o:p></p></div></blockquote></div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; ">_______________________________________________<br>Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><o:p></o:p></div></div></blockquote></div><div style="margin-top: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-left: 0cm; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div></div><br><br><hr style="border-top-style: none; border-right-style: none; border-bottom-style: none; border-left-style: none; border-width: initial; border-color: initial; color: rgb(144, 144, 144); background-color: rgb(176, 176, 176); height: 1px; width: 1039px; "><table style="border-collapse: collapse; border-top-style: none; border-right-style: none; border-bottom-style: none; border-left-style: none; border-width: initial; border-color: initial; "><tbody><tr><td style="border-top-style: none; border-right-style: none; border-bottom-style: none; border-left-style: none; border-width: initial; border-color: initial; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 15px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 8px; "><a href="http://www.avast.com/" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; "><img border="0" src="http://static.avast.com/emails/avast-mail-stamp.png"></a></td><td><p style="color: rgb(61, 77, 90); font-family: Calibri, Verdana, Arial, Helvetica; font-size: 12pt; ">Ce courrier électronique ne contient aucun virus ou logiciel malveillant parce que la protection<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://www.avast.com/" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">Antivirus avast!</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>est active. </p></td></tr></tbody></table><br>_______________________________________________<br>Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><br></div></span></blockquote></div><br></div></div></div></body></html>