<div dir="ltr">Dear all,<div>thanks for the draft.</div><div>I support Kavouss comments and suggested edits.</div><div>Regards</div><div>Olga</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-05-02 4:35 GMT-03:00 Kavouss Arasteh <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div>IMPORTANT AND URGENT </div><div><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Dear co-chairs,</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Thank you very much for your enormous and tireless efforts to put this
doc. for final comments</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">I have had many comments but I could not finish the edits till now.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">I therefore do not wish to delay the work.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">However, I have one VERY IMPORTANT edit that I raised it in my last
e-mail.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">That edit is relating to a reference to ICANN or Internet Process as
being «private led <span> </span>multistakeholder” <span> </span>organization or process.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">This is a mistake. a big mistake. There is no such preference to one
category of stakeholder over other categories of stakeholder (private or public) .</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">I raised this matter at one of our call and asked for deletion of that
term.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">All stakeholder, irrespective being private, public, and etc. <b>SHALL </b><span> </span>be treated equally. This issue was raised at
various occasions by NTIA indicating / emphasizing that no single category of
the stakeholder should benefit from preference over other categories of
stakeholders .This term was used at very early stage of the introduction of the
ICANN into the business. Over the time when we discussed that the process
should be inclusive, democratic, then it was agreed by everybody that no
category of the stakeholder should have any preference, what so ever, or should
have <span> </span><span> </span>a preferred treatment over other categories of
the stakeholders.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">In view of the above, I urge you to <span> </span>kindly correct such a big mistake which if it
is not corrected would put us in a very delicate situation that we did not
respect impartiality and neutrality in treating <span> </span>various categories of the stakeholders.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">There are 4 or 5 times that such a reference to »private led multistakeholder
are referred to in the doc.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Pls kindly make a simple «find" check and delete all that. <span> </span>Term in other part of doc. whenever, so as
reference is maded to multistakeholder there is no such an incorrect and
discriminative preference.</span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 0pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Regards</span></p><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="background:white;margin:0cm 0cm 6.75pt;line-height:normal;vertical-align:middle"><span style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";font-size:12pt">Kavouss </span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font></font></span></div><div><div class="h5"><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-05-02 9:01 GMT+02:00 Kavouss Arasteh <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com" target="_blank">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid"><div dir="ltr"><div>Dear All,</div><div>I have not finish edits .I am on page 50. However, in view of time time constrain, I have an important edit that is attached.</div><div>The same edit should be carried forward elsewhere throughout the entire document . please then search for " private sector led " and DELETE THAT . I mentioned in one of the call .See Attached doc. </div><div>Regards</div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div><div>2015-05-02 3:34 GMT+02:00 Samantha Eisner <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Samantha.Eisner@icann.org" target="_blank">Samantha.Eisner@icann.org</a>></span>:<br></div></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;padding-left:1ex;border-left-color:rgb(204,204,204);border-left-width:1px;border-left-style:solid"><div><div>
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<div>Thanks Grace. </div>
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<div>Dear CCWG, </div>
<div>Attached please find some proposed edits for consideration.</div>
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<div>Best, </div>
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<div>Sam</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, May 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM<span><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
</span><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC<br>
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<div>Hi all, </div>
<div>Just a reminder than edits, comments are due in approximately 3h. Thank you to those who sent edits earlier today. If you must send late edits, please send a note to the Chairs<u> with staff in copy</u> to give us notice that your comments will be delayed.
Best to stick to the deadline, but we know everyone is working hard to get this draft report ready, and we’d rather get your comments than not at all.</div>
<div>Have a good weekend, </div>
<div>Grace</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, May 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC<br>
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<div>Dear all, </div>
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<div>We sent the V10 draft report earlier today (in UTC) but have been notified that, in some cases, the files are too large to download from the email attachments. As a reminder, the draft (redline and clean versions) are posted on the Wiki: <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report</a>. </div>
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<div>Looking forward to receiving your comments and edits,</div>
<div>Grace</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC<br>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Dear all, </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Here attached is the CCWG-Accountability Draft Report V10. I have attached a redline and a clean version (in Word and PDF). </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Version 10 incorporates the following: </div>
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<li>Changes from the CCWG-Accountability call on Thursday 30 April at 05:00 UTC</li><li>Edits from legal counsel (Sidley and Adler)</li><li>Approval from the CWG-Stewardship Chairs/Client Committee regarding incorporation of CWG-Stewardship recommendations</li><li>Edits from Chairs and Rapporteurs </li></ul>
</span><div><font color="#ff0000">Please send your edits, comments, etc to the mailing list by<b><span style="font-size:16px">Saturday 2 May 01:00 UTC</span></b></font>
<font color="#ff0000" style="font-size:14px">(24h from now)</font>. Staff will incorporate the edits over the weekend so as to release a final version for Public Comment on Monday, 4 May. <i style="font-size:14px">If possible, edits are appreciate in track
changes in the <u>clean</u> version so that they are <u>clearly marked and visible</u>.
</i>There will be professional formatting and copyediting done before publication, so we suggest that your time my be best spent by focusing on the substance-related edits. </div><span>
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<div style="font-size:14px">Also, please remember to submit your feedback regarding the XPlane graphics by Saturday as well. Adam will send a reminder re: XPlane. </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Almost there!</div>
<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">— Grace </div>
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