<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear All,</div><div>I have not finish edits .I am on page 50. However, in view of time time constrain, I have an important edit that is attached.</div><div>The same edit should be carried forward elsewhere throughout the entire document . please then search for " private sector led " and DELETE THAT . I mentioned in one of the call .See Attached doc. </div><div>Regards</div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-05-02 3:34 GMT+02:00 Samantha Eisner <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:Samantha.Eisner@icann.org" target="_blank">Samantha.Eisner@icann.org</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<div>Thanks Grace. </div>
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<div>Dear CCWG, </div>
<div>Attached please find some proposed edits for consideration.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, May 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM<span><br>
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</span><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC<br>
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<div>Hi all, </div>
<div>Just a reminder than edits, comments are due in approximately 3h. Thank you to those who sent edits earlier today. If you must send late edits, please send a note to the Chairs<u> with staff in copy</u> to give us notice that your comments will be delayed.
Best to stick to the deadline, but we know everyone is working hard to get this draft report ready, and we’d rather get your comments than not at all.</div>
<div>Have a good weekend, </div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, May 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM<br>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC<br>
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<div>Dear all, </div>
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<div>We sent the V10 draft report earlier today (in UTC) but have been notified that, in some cases, the files are too large to download from the email attachments. As a reminder, the draft (redline and clean versions) are posted on the Wiki: <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report</a>. </div>
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<div>Looking forward to receiving your comments and edits,</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Grace Abuhamad <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC<br>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Dear all, </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Here attached is the CCWG-Accountability Draft Report V10. I have attached a redline and a clean version (in Word and PDF). </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Version 10 incorporates the following: </div>
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<li>Changes from the CCWG-Accountability call on Thursday 30 April at 05:00 UTC</li><li>Edits from legal counsel (Sidley and Adler)</li><li>Approval from the CWG-Stewardship Chairs/Client Committee regarding incorporation of CWG-Stewardship recommendations</li><li>Edits from Chairs and Rapporteurs </li></ul>
</span><div><font color="#ff0000">Please send your edits, comments, etc to the mailing list by<b><span style="font-size:16px">Saturday 2 May 01:00 UTC</span></b></font>
<font color="#ff0000" style="font-size:14px">(24h from now)</font>. Staff will incorporate the edits over the weekend so as to release a final version for Public Comment on Monday, 4 May. <i style="font-size:14px">If possible, edits are appreciate in track
changes in the <u>clean</u> version so that they are <u>clearly marked and visible</u>.
</i>There will be professional formatting and copyediting done before publication, so we suggest that your time my be best spent by focusing on the substance-related edits. </div><span>
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<div style="font-size:14px">Also, please remember to submit your feedback regarding the XPlane graphics by Saturday as well. Adam will send a reminder re: XPlane. </div>
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<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Almost there!</div>
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