<div dir="ltr">Hi all<div><br></div><div>I've had a gentle go at the paper circulated earlier (original re-attached for ref - the files with the date 2015-07-21) regarding the recall of the ICANN Board.</div><div><br></div><div>See my edits in the files beginning with 2015-07-23.</div><div><br></div><div>I've accepted all the changes that were marked up in the lawyers' version, and made a few changes to respond to the comments in the document.</div><div><br></div><div>This does leave this paper quite different in style to the other powers, much more detailed in terms of implementation. </div><div><br></div><div>We will have to reduce the detail and edit it to achieve that, but I am afraid that I haven't got the time to do that this evening.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>So: please review, and we will discuss on the call at 12h UTC, and get some sense of how / if I should do further editing for further consideration at the WP1 call next week.</div><div><br></div><div><b>Non WP1 CCWG participants</b> - please note that WP1 members did ask for more time to deal with it, so this paper hasn't had thorough scrutiny or agreement as yet by WP1.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>thanks,</div><div>Jordan</div><div><br></div><div><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Jordan Carter<br><br>Chief Executive <br><b>InternetNZ</b><br><br>04 495 2118 (office) | +64 21 442 649 (mob)<br><a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz" target="_blank">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a> <br>Skype: jordancarter<br><br><i>A better world through a better Internet </i><br><br></div></div></div></div>
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