<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky&#39;s changes.  Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM, Malcolm Hutty <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net" target="_blank">malcolm@linx.net</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">On 2015-07-30 22:07, Burr, Becky wrote:<br>
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Sending again<br>
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Thank you again Becky.<br>
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Best,<br>
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Malcolm.<br>
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J. Beckwith Burr<br>
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 From: &lt;Burr&gt;, Becky Burr &lt;<a href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz" target="_blank">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>&gt;<br>
 Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 4:20 PM<br>
 To: Accountability Community<br>
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 Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] FW: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report<br>
revised to reflect our work<br>
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These are the current docs<br>
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J. Beckwith Burr<br>
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NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer<span class=""><br>
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