<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Greg — is it possible for you to merge your edits/comments into the consolidated draft that Becky and Malcolm just shared?</div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 7:20 PM<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> Malcolm Hutty <<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net">malcolm@linx.net</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span> Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] IRP text following call with Malcolm<br></div><div><br></div><div><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"><div><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's changes. Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM, Malcolm Hutty <span dir="ltr">
<<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net" target="_blank">malcolm@linx.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
On 2015-07-30 22:07, Burr, Becky wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
Sending again<br></blockquote><br>
Thank you again Becky.<br><br>
Best,<br><br>
Malcolm.<br><br><br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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From: <Burr>, Becky Burr <<a href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz" target="_blank">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>><br>
Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 4:20 PM<br>
To: Accountability Community<br>
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Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] FW: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report<br>
revised to reflect our work<br><br>
These are the current docs<br><br>
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