<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>My apologies Robin. Your edit was indeed noted in the meeting notes. Here is the updated version with your edit included.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Robin Gross &lt;<a href="mailto:robin@ipjustice.org">robin@ipjustice.org</a>&gt;<br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 12:09 PM<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> Grace Abuhamad &lt;<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>&gt;<br><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span> Accountability Cross Community &lt;<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>&gt;<br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary<br></div><div><br></div><div><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">This document still says a "culture of <i>accountability</i>" instead of "transparency" for WS2, as was pointed out in the call this morning. &nbsp;WS2 is instituting at "culture of transparency" at ICANN. &nbsp;Everything we do falls under "accountability" - WS2 addresses how "transparency" will help ICANN to be more accountable.<div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Robin</div><div><br></div><div><br><div><div>On Jul 30, 2015, at 8:56 AM, Grace Abuhamad wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px;"><div>Dear all,&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div>Sharing on Mathieu&#8217;s behalf the updated Executive Summary:&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div><div>Updates include:</div><div>- WS1 definition included</div><div>- language to clarify that powers are escalation path&nbsp;</div><div>- Added mention of IFR challenge (Sabine's point)</div><div>- removed () around Human rights WS2 issue.</div></div><div><br></div><div>Best,&nbsp;</div><div>Grace</div></div><span>&lt;Executive Summary_3007.docx&gt;</span><span>&lt;Executive Summary_3007_redline.docx&gt;</span><span>&lt;Executive Summary_3007_redline.pdf&gt;</span><span>&lt;Executive Summary_3007.pdf&gt;</span>_______________________________________________<br>Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><br></blockquote></div><br></div></div></div></span></body></html>