<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">A consolidated draft with changes from Becky, Malcolm and myself is attached. Given where we are in the process, I have included marginal comments explaining any change I made that was more than punctuation or a typo. I don't think any of the changes represent "new ideas" but there are a couple of places where the original idea was rather obscure so I attempted to clarify it.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 7:45 PM, Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">What new ideas are you referring to?</div></div><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5"><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 7:45 PM, Malcolm Hutty <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:malcolm@linx.net" target="_blank">malcolm@linx.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Correcting typos is fine, but I believe the Chair announced that we are past the point of introducing new ideas that haven't been agreed by the working party.<br>
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> On 31 Jul 2015, at 00:20, Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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> My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's changes. Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.<br>
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