<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>I also support the short version of text suggested by Dr. Eberhart but strongly object to the Keith ,s text ad it is too narrow and does miss many points as I mentioned before . Once again I fully support the short and high level text of my friend Dr.</div><div>Kavouss <br><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><br>On 1 Aug 2015, at 08:00, Dr Eberhard W Lisse <<a href="mailto:el@lisse.na">el@lisse.na</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"><div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">Actually,</span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">Drazek_1 as amended by Lisse should read:</span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></div><div><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will respect<br>fundamental human rights, in particular the exercise of free expression,<br>free flow of information and due process</span></font></blockquote><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">which I can live with, whereas my preferred language would be:</span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></div><div><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">ICANN will respect fundamental human rights</span></font></blockquote></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">:)-O</span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></div><div><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">el</span><br></div><br>-- <div>Sent from Dr Lisse's iPad mini</div></div><div><br>On Jul 31, 2015, at 23:23, Avri Doria <<a href="mailto:avri@acm.org">avri@acm.org</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><span>Hi,</span><br><span></span><br><span>I am sure I missed some, but the ones I found going through the email</span><br><span>while doing some prep work earlier today.</span><br><span></span><br><span>Please let me know of any formulation I missed.</span><br><span>I know I missed Kavouss' phrasing.</span><br><span></span><br><span></span><br><span>_Doria 1_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Work to ensure that ICANN respects human right obligations within its</span><br><span>mission, accounts for impact on human rights in policy creation, and</span><br><span>adheres to the "Respect, Protect and Remedy" framework developed by the UN./</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Curry __1_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Work to ensure that ICANN respects human rights within its mission and</span><br><span>accounts for the impact on human rights in its policy creation, policy</span><br><span>implementation, review and assessment./</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Doria 2_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/In order to enure that openness of the Internet within ICANN's mission</span><br><span>may be maintained, human rights impact assessments will be done on</span><br><span>ICANN policies [as appropriate]/</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Doria 3_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/ICANN will be committed to respect fundamental human rights in its</span><br><span>operations/</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Drazek 1_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed to</span><br><span>respect the fundamental human rights of the exercise of free expression</span><br><span>and the free flow of information./</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Arasteh 1_</span><br><span></span><br><span>(I know there is one but i can't find the text.)</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Shatan 1_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed to</span><br><span>respect internationally recognized fundamental human rights/</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Drazek as amended by Lisse_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed to</span><br><span>respect the fundamental human rights, inter alia, the exercise of free</span><br><span>expression and the free flow of information./</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Lisse 1_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will respect</span><br><span>fundamental human rights, in particular the exercise of free expression,</span><br><span>free flow of information and due process. /</span><br><span></span><br><span>_Doria 4 (with offlist help)_</span><br><span></span><br><span>/Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed to</span><br><span>respect the fundamental human rights as enshrined in the Universal</span><br><span>Declaration of Human Rights 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