<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Two off the top of my head suggestions after reading this, which I think its solid common sense input that we should take on board:<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">1. I think that it would be valuable to invite Ira to our working sessions in Dublin, and also invite our other advisors to take part in our working sessions more actively.</div><div class="">2. Have we considered restructuring our document in a manner more akin to the CWG’s style, with a shorter core document that is presented in a simpler plainer language and moving the heavy detailed legal work to appendixes?</div><div class=""><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>By way of example currently we have 128 pages of document and 46 pages of Appendix, I would suggest that we undertake an effort to flip those numbers around to make the document more accesable.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">-James</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 14 Sep 2015, at 21:25, Thomas Rickert <<a href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net" class="">thomas@rickert.net</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii" class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class="">All,</div><div class="">please find below a note from Ira Magaziner, one of our Advisors. I have also included his covering note for your attention.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Kind regards,</div><div class="">Thomas </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><blockquote cite="mid:AE0B800289081546838C275D08FDE7B3199088@mako" type="cite" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Thomas and Colleagues;<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I hope that you do not mind, but I have taken the liberty of framing my views in a short note to you and to Mathieu which is attached. This is not intended for posting but feel free to share it with members of your working groups if you think they will find it useful.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I look forward to assisting you in your important work if you think I can be helpful.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Best Wishes,<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Ira</span></div></div></blockquote></div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div><span id="cid:BF1E5225-DDE2-4400-9521-2AF0375DED3B@CYBERINVASION.local"><ICANN response.docx></span><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii" class=""><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><br class=""><div apple-content-edited="true" class="">
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