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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Becky,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Ah sorry: I see now. My mistake.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I had gone back to the original mission and I think I must have missed a lot of the discussion that led to the CCWG Proposed Text which seems to me to widen
ICANN’s mission with respect to ccTLDs. (I’m sure such terminology is quite appropriate for regulation in the gTLD space.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">So it is already ground that has been lost for the mission statement.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">My apologies for having raised this too late. I’ll just note that some wording (“of the DNS”) has not been transferred across from the CCWG Proposed Text to
the Text as Modified and regret the loss of terms like “appropriately related” and “these technical functions” that recognise limitations to ICANN’s role supported in the scope defined by the ccNSO-related bylaws.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz]
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<b>Sent:</b> 03 November 2015 20:57<br>
<b>To:</b> Martin Boyle; Accountability Community; Andrew Sullivan; iab@iab.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: WP2 Issues from last night's call<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Confused Martin – none of the language re names has changed for months Martin, other than changing "</span><span style="font-family:"Avenir Book"">Domain names (forming a system referred
to as "DNS</span><span style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Avenir Book"">”</span><span style="font-family:"Avenir Book"">)” to "names in the root zone of the Domain Name System (</span><span style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Avenir Book"">“</span><span style="font-family:"Avenir Book"">DNS”).
Otherwise the language remains exactly the same.</span> <br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">J. Beckwith Burr<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Martin Boyle <<a href="mailto:Martin.Boyle@nominet.uk">Martin.Boyle@nominet.uk</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, November 3, 2015 at 12:35 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Becky Burr <<a href="mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz">becky.burr@neustar.biz</a>>, Accountability Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>>, Andrew Sullivan <<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>>,
"<a href="mailto:iab@iab.org">iab@iab.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:iab@iab.org">iab@iab.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>RE: WP2 Issues from last night's call<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I’m sorry, but I have some concerns with the text as it has evolved for (new 1) the names part of the mission statement. Not having been on today’s call, this
might have been covered. However, the new wording does seem to me to extend the role of ICANN for ccTLDs.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">For ccTLDs the ICANN policy role is limited to root-zone issues and those that can be directly linked to security, stability and resilience of the DNS. The
new wording appears to me to broaden the coverage.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">First bullet: “reasonably necessary to facilitate openness, interoperability [and/or] security…”: I’m not sure I know what reasonably necessary means, but
in association with the qualities, it could easily be interpreted as harmonising on specific requirements. Could we think of some wording that limits the potential for mission creep? How about, “For which coordinated resolution is appropriate and necessary
to facilitate resilience, security and/or stability.”?</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Second bullet: I have significant concerns about the word “designed.” Could we replace the bullet with, “That are developed through a bottom-up, consensus-based
multi-stakeholder process and that are necessary to ensure the stable and secure operation of the Internet’s unique names system.”?</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Martin</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Burr, Becky<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 03 November 2015 15:14<br>
<b>To:</b> Accountability Community; Andrew Sullivan; <a href="mailto:iab@iab.org">
iab@iab.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CCWG-ACCT] WP2 Issues from last night's call</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">I’ve attached a revised deck trying to lay out our conclusions from last night.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">1. We concluded to resolve the support/coordinate problem by eliminating the chapeau in the Mission Statement. See Slide 1 and the side-by-side document</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">2. Kavouss strongly urged us to modify the language of the regulatory preclusion. I have taken a shot at that in purple in the side-by-side document</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">3. Greg Shatan proposed a modification to the contracting language also reflected in purple on slide 2</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">4. We agreed to put transparency points 1 and 2 in WS1 and to address points 3 and 4 as part of WS2.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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