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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 10/11/2015 12:54, Dr. Tatiana
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      Hello<br>
      I already made a comment on the chat during CCWG call today,
      making it here again.<br>
      I think the human rights language in the summary is a bit
      confusing. "Reinforcing Adherence to Human Rights Protocols"
      (pages 7, 8, 31) is not exactly what WP4 proposed. The word
      "protocols" makes no sense in this context, it will be good either
      for diplomatic language or for IETF, but not for the CCWG
      document. As far as I am concerned, we are not suggesting to
      commit to any "protocols", furthermore, we even decided not to
      suggest to mention any instruments. Even within the context of
      international human rights law mentioning "protocols" doesn't make
      any sense. <br>
      I believe just "human rights" or "internationally recognised human
      rights" would be much better wording. But not "protocols" because
      it is confusing. <br>
      Best regards<br>
      Tanya <br>
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      <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 09/11/15 22:42, Bernard Turcotte
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          <div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">Please find
            attached the first full draft of the executive summary which
            will be discussed on the call tomorrow.</div>
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          <div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">Apologies
            for the delay in getting this out but people have been
            working almost around the clock.</div>
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          <div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">Bernard
            Turcotte</div>
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          <div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">for the
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