<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I&#39;m flattered (I think) to have my name attached to a proposal.  However, my thinking has evolved with regard to certain parts of the post-Dublin language, &quot;my&quot; proposal and Malcolm&#39;s proposal.  I would suggest a version that is in many ways is an amalgamation of these 3.  The first paragraph is most similar to Malcolm&#39;s proposal, while the second is most similar to the Post-Dublin proposal.  The third paragraph is taken from the Second Draft Report and from the recommendations of WP1 after the second public comment analysis.  A clean version is below, followed by a version of Becky&#39;s chart with an added column for this proposal (a PDF is also attached).  For convenience, I&#39;ve marked my latest version against Malcolm&#39;s rather than my prior version.  As a general rule, I chose versions that had the clearest language and avoided extra phrases that did not seem to add meaning.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><font face="verdana, sans-serif" color="#666666">ICANN shall only act in accordance with
its Mission.</font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><font face="verdana, sans-serif" color="#666666"> </font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><font face="verdana, sans-serif" color="#666666">Without in any way limiting the
foregoing, ICANN shall not regulate services (i.e. those offered by web
servers, mail servers and the like) that use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers or
the content that those services carry or provide.</font></p>

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><font face="verdana, sans-serif" color="#666666">The prohibition on regulation of
services that use the Internet’s unique identifiers or the content that they
carry or provide does not act as a restraint on ICANN’s authority to negotiate,
enter into and enforce agreements. 
Consensus Policy, as defined in “Consensus Policies and Temporary
Policies Specification” in the 2013 Registrar Accreditation Agreement, is outside
of such prohibition.</font><font face="Avenir Book, serif"></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif;margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"><br></span></p><table class="" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" align="left" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif;border-collapse:collapse;margin-left:6pt;margin-right:6pt">
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">2<sup>nd</sup> Draft
  Report Language</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Post-Dublin
  Language</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Greg
  Shatan Proposal 2 Nov 2015</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Malcolm
  Hutty Proposal 6 Nov 2015</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Greg Shatan Proposal 9 Nov 2015</span></p>
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  <td width="205" valign="top" style="width:153.9pt;border-style:none solid solid;border-right-color:windowtext;border-bottom-color:windowtext;border-left-color:windowtext;border-right-width:1pt;border-bottom-width:1pt;border-left-width:1pt;padding:0in 5.4pt">
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">ICANN
  shall have no power to act other than in accordance with, and as reasonably
  appropriate to achieve its Mission.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Without
  in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not
  engage in or use its powers to attempt the regulation of services that use
  the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers, or the content that they carry or provide.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><s><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:rgb(51,102,255)"> </span></s><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <td width="186" valign="top" style="width:139.5pt;border-style:none solid solid none;border-bottom-color:windowtext;border-bottom-width:1pt;border-right-color:windowtext;border-right-width:1pt;padding:0in 5.4pt">
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">ICANN
  shall <s><span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">have no power to</span></s> act <span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">strictly<s>other than</s></span><span style="color:rgb(0,0,144)"> </span>in accordance with, and <span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">only</span> as
  reasonably appropriate to achieve its Mission.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Without
  in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not
  regulate services that use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers, or the content
  that such services carry or provide.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:rgb(51,102,255)">In service of its Mission</span><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:red"> </span><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:rgb(51,102,255)">ICANN shall have the ability to enforce agreements with
  contracted parties, subject to established means of community input on those
  agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose
  obligations exceeding ICANN’s Mission on registries and registrars.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <td width="186" valign="top" style="width:139.5pt;border-style:none solid solid none;border-bottom-color:windowtext;border-bottom-width:1pt;border-right-color:windowtext;border-right-width:1pt;padding:0in 5.4pt">
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">ICANN
  shall have no power to act other than in accordance with, and as reasonably
  appropriate to achieve its Mission.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Without
  in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not
  regulate services that use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers, or the content
  that such services carry or provide.  </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:rgb(251,0,7)">ICANN and contracted parties entering into, complying with and
  enforcing agreements does not constitute regulation.</span><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:blue"> In service of its Mission, ICANN shall have the ability to
  enforce agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of
  community input on those agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its
  ability to impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s Mission on registries and
  registrars.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">ICANN
  shall only act strictly in accordance with <s><span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">and
  as reasonably appropriate</span></s> to achieve its Mission.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Without
  in any way limiting the foregoing, ICANN shall not engage in or use its
  powers to attempt the regulation of services that use the Internet&#39;s unique
  identifiers <span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">to enable or facilitate their
  reachability over the Internet, nor shall it regulate</span> <s><span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">or</span></s> the content that those services
  carry or provide.</span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">ICANN
  shall have the ability to negotiate, enter into and enforce agreements with
  contracted parties <span style="color:rgb(51,102,255)">in service of its Mission.</span></span><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><s><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:rgb(51,102,255)">subject to established means of community input on those
  agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose
  obligations exceeding ICANN’s Mission on registries and registrars</span></s><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt"><s><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif;color:rgb(51,102,255)"> </span></s><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Cambria,serif"></span></p>
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  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">ICANN shall only act <span class=""><del cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:44">strictly</del></span><a href="file:///C:/Users/Greg/Documents/Comparison%20of%20Mission%20and%20Core%20Values%20Language.docx#_ftn1" name="_ftnref1" title=""><span class=""><span class=""><span style="font-size:11pt;line-height:115%">[1]</span></span></span></a>
  in accordance with its Mission.</span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif">Without in any way limiting the
  foregoing, ICANN shall not <span class=""><del cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:56">engage in or use its powers to attempt the
  regulation of </del></span>regulate services<span class=""><ins cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:44"> (i.e. those offered
  by web servers, mail servers and the like)</ins></span><a href="file:///C:/Users/Greg/Documents/Comparison%20of%20Mission%20and%20Core%20Values%20Language.docx#_ftn2" name="_ftnref2" title=""><span class=""><span class=""><span style="font-size:11pt;line-height:115%">[2]</span></span></span></a> that
  use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers<span class=""><del cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:44"> to enable or
  facilitate their reachability over the Internet, nor shall it regulate</del></span><a href="file:///C:/Users/Greg/Documents/Comparison%20of%20Mission%20and%20Core%20Values%20Language.docx#_ftn3" name="_ftnref3" title=""><span class=""><span class=""><span style="font-size:11pt;line-height:115%">[3]</span></span></span></a> or
  the content that those services carry or provide.</span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"><span class=""><ins cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:45">The prohibition on
  regulation of services that use the Internet’s unique identifiers or the
  content that they carry or provide does not act as a restraint on ICANN’s
  authority to negotiate, enter into and enforce agreements.<a href="file:///C:/Users/Greg/Documents/Comparison%20of%20Mission%20and%20Core%20Values%20Language.docx#_ftn4" name="_ftnref4" title=""><sup><sup><span style="font-size:11pt;line-height:115%"><ins cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:45">[4]</ins></span></sup></sup></a>  Consensus Policy, as defined in “Consensus
  Policies and Temporary Policies Specification” in the 2013 Registrar
  Accreditation Agreement, is outside of such prohibition.<a href="file:///C:/Users/Greg/Documents/Comparison%20of%20Mission%20and%20Core%20Values%20Language.docx#_ftn5" name="_ftnref5" title=""><sup><sup><span style="font-size:11pt;line-height:115%"><ins cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:45">[5]</ins></span></sup></sup></a></ins></span></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"><span class=""><del cite="mailto:Greg%20Shatan" datetime="2015-11-10T00:46">ICANN shall have the
  ability to negotiate, enter into and enforce agreements with contracted
  parties in service of its Mission.</del></span></span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 4.5pt 0.0001pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
  <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt 4.5pt"><span style="font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;,serif"> </span></p>
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have not accepted Malcolm’s addition of “strictly,” since this will be
construed to mandate the most restrictive and conservative interpretation
possible and thus make the bylaw overly inflexible.</p>

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<p class=""><a href="file:///C:/Users/Greg/Documents/Comparison%20of%20Mission%20and%20Core%20Values%20Language.docx#_ftnref2" name="_ftn2" title=""><span class=""><span class=""><span style="font-size:10pt;line-height:115%;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">[2]</span></span></span></a>
This is taken from an email from Malcolm Hutty, as a description of what is
meant by “services” in this context.  Due
to the variety of meanings that “services” can have, it is necessary to avoid
ambiguity.</p>

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Once the nature of the “services” is clarified, the nature of their “use” no
longer needs to be clarified. </p>

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This is taken almost verbatim from the Second Draft Report, para. 158.  Since it is a direct comment on the contents
of the Bylaw, it should be reflected in the draft Bylaw.  Once this is here, Malcolm’s last sentence is
no longer needed.</p>

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This is a recommendation taken from the “Comment Summary PRINCIPLES” analysis
prepared by WP1 after the second Public Comment period.</p>

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</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Nov 9, 2015 at 7:09 PM, Burr, Becky <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz" target="_blank">Becky.Burr@neustar.biz</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">









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<div>In advance of our call tomorrow I want to flag the open issue in the Mission Statement – language prohibiting ICANN from regulating &quot;services that use the Internet’s unique identifiers or the content that they carry or provide.&quot;  </div>
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<div>While there is strong consensus that (1) ICANN’s mission is limited and (2) ICANN should act only in furtherance of its mission, strong and divergent perspectives on the proposed language itself remain.  The language has been in the proposed Mission Statement
 since our Frankfurt meeting last January.  Numerous commenters supported the language in both the first and second comment periods on the grounds that ICANN should not attempt to regulate third parties through its agreements with registries and registrars.
  On the other hand, many commenters expressed concerns about potential unintended consequences of this language, and the impact that it might have, for example, on ICANN’s ability to enforce commitments contained in registry and/or registrar commitments (e.g.,
 Public Interest Commitments, special-interest new gTLD applications, etc.).   </div>
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<div>The following chart (also attached as a PDF) compares the language in the 2nd Draft Report with language circulated shortly following the Dublin meeting, and suggested language proposed by Greg Shatan and Malcolm Hutty respectively to resolve this issue.
   (Another approach, which I floated, was strongly criticized.)  As we review and discuss this language tomorrow, please keep in mind that we have always been clear that the language in the proposed Mission Statement is not final Bylaws language, rather it
 intended to guide those crafting final Bylaws.  I look forward to a fruitful discussion in 12 hours!</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">2<sup>nd</sup> Draft Report Language<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Post-Dublin Language<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Greg Shatan Proposal 2 Nov 2015<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Malcolm Hutty Proposal 6 Nov 2015<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">ICANN shall have no power to act other than in accordance with, and as reasonably appropriate to achieve its Mission.
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Without in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not engage in or use its powers to attempt the regulation of services that use the Internet&#39;s unique
 identifiers, or the content that they carry or provide.</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">ICANN shall
<s><span style="color:#3366ff">have no power to</span></s> act <span style="color:#3366ff">
strictly</span><span style="color:#000090"> </span><s><span style="color:#3366ff">other than</span></s><span style="color:#000090">
</span>in accordance with, and <span style="color:#3366ff">only</span> as reasonably appropriate to achieve its Mission.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Without in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services that use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers, or the content that such services carry
 or provide. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:rgb(51,102,255)">In service of its Mission</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:red">
</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:rgb(51,102,255)">ICANN shall have the ability to enforce agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of community input on those agreements and reasonable checks
 and balances on its ability to impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s Mission on registries and registrars.</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">ICANN shall have no power to act other than in accordance with, and as reasonably appropriate to achieve its Mission.
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Without in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services that use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers, or the content that such services carry
 or provide.  <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:rgb(251,0,7)">ICANN and contracted parties entering into, complying with and enforcing agreements does not constitute regulation.</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:blue"> In service of its Mission, ICANN shall have the ability to enforce agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of community input on those agreements
 and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s Mission on registries and registrars.</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">ICANN shall only act strictly in accordance with</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">
<s><span style="color:#3366ff">and as reasonably appropriate</span></s> to achieve</span><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"> its Mission.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">Without in any way limiting the foregoing, ICANN shall not engage in or use its powers to attempt the regulation of services that use the Internet&#39;s unique identifiers
<span style="color:#3366ff">to enable or facilitate their reachability over the Internet, nor shall it regulate</span>
<s><span style="color:#3366ff">or</span></s> the content that those services carry or provide.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;">ICANN shall have the ability to negotiate, enter into and enforce agreements with contracted parties
<span style="color:#3366ff">in service of its Mission.</span></span><s><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:rgb(51,102,255)"><u></u><u></u></span></s></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><s><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;;color:rgb(51,102,255)">subject to established means of community input on those agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose obligations exceeding
 ICANN’s Mission on registries and registrars</span></s><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:&#39;Avenir Book&#39;"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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