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On 13 Nov 2015 18:08, "Greg Shatan" <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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> A few quick comments, since that's all there's time for under this plan. I was only able to review my prior comments against this draft; no time for a full read.<br>
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> 1. Page 11: Petition Process: Is it clear that any individual, regardless of affiliation can begin a petition in any AC/SO for every power? Even removing that AC/SO's appointed director? For example, can Justin Bieber start a petition in the GNSO to remove Bruce Tonkin? If that is what we agreed to, never mind. It just strikes me as odd, and I haven't seen it expressed this way before. (I think we used the passive voice before, which did not identify the "actor" or any limitation on their identity or affiliation.)<br>
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SO: Page 18 addresses your fears.</p>
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> On Fri, Nov 13, 2015 at 9:57 AM, Mathieu Weill <<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr">mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a>> wrote:<br>
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>> Dear Sabine,<br>
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>> I think that this is version issue. The version of the document you are referencing is the incorrect one.<br>
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>> Indeed, it was part of the transparency issues mentioned in Dublin and, during the CCWG call #65 we specifically discussed the item (see the slides here : <a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/56144581/WP2%20Issues%202%20Nov%202015.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1446529282000&api=v2">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/56144581/WP2%20Issues%202%20Nov%202015.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1446529282000&api=v2</a>) and acknowledged that there we had received several requests to address this issue in WS2.<br>
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>> Thank you for raising this consistency issue.<br>
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>> Best,<br>
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>> Mathieu<br>
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>> De : <a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>] De la part de <a href="mailto:Sabine.Meyer@bmwi.bund.de">Sabine.Meyer@bmwi.bund.de</a><br>
>> Envoyé : vendredi 13 novembre 2015 15:01<br>
>> À : <a href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a><br>
>> Cc : <a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a><br>
>> Objet : Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG - Draft Update document for CCWG call<br>
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>> Dear Bernard,<br>
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>> thank you for updating and re-sending the draft!<br>
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>> To my understanding, the list of WS2 items on p 29 does not yet reflect the current status of discussions if indeed the latest version is the following: <a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/50823981/AJed%2020151026%20Items%20for%20Consideration%20in%20Work%20Stream%202.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1446576372000&api=v2">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/50823981/AJed%2020151026%20Items%20for%20Consideration%20in%20Work%20Stream%202.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1446576372000&api=v2</a><br>
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>> In that case, “ICANN’s interaction with governments” is currently not part of the draft.<br>
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>> Thank you for considering this.<br>
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>> Kind regards<br>
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>> Sabine Meyer<br>
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>> Von: <a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>] Im Auftrag von Bernard Turcotte<br>
>> Gesendet: Freitag, 13. November 2015 00:04<br>
>> An: Accountability Cross Community<br>
>> Betreff: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG - Draft Update document for CCWG call<br>
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>> All,<br>
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>> As per Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft Proposal Update document which will be discussed at the next CCWG meeting.<br>
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>> The document is going to professional formatting as we speak - so any issues of layout, fonts etc. will be addressed by a specialist.<br>
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>> This document also represents a consideration of all the comments received with respect to the previous version - not that all of these were accepted, but a majority were taken on.<br>
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>> We apologize for the lateness of the document, but as you will notice we have put significant efforts into recasting this per the comments.<br>
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>> Bernard Turcotte<br>
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