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Hi Alice<br>
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W/r/t this on page 21:<br>
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The CCWG-Accountability is yet to reach consensus on the proposed
language that is intended to<br>
address contract enforcement and regulation: [PLACEHOLDER: Without
in any way limiting the<br>
foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services
that use the Internet's unique<br>
identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide.
ICANN shall have the ability to enforce<br>
agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of
community input on those<br>
agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to
impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s<br>
Mission on registries and registrars.]<br>
<br>
Could we be clearer as follows: first putting the agreed text from
proposal v2 and then the caveat given that we have no agreement on a
variation on that text as of yet. Our approach so far has been to
refer to or look back to existing agreed text.<br>
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<blockquote>Without in any way limiting the foregoing absolute
prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services that use the
Internet's unique<br>
identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide.
ICANN shall have the ability to enforce<br>
agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means
of community input on those<br>
agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to
impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s<br>
Mission on registries and registrars. <br>
<br>
<i>Note: The CCWG Accountability is continuing discussions on
contract enforcement and regulation, in particular as relates to
comments from proposal v2. </i> <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 13/11/2015 13:40, Alice Jansen
wrote:<br>
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<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Dear all,</div>
<div>As announced on your call #67, this is to kindly remind you
that final edits on the attached draft Formal Update (circulated
on 12 November) are needed by
<u><b>17:00 UTC today</b>.</u></div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">As indicated on the call, no
line edits will be taken into account. Co-Chairs are asking for
content related comments.</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Per the note below, any format,
font and proofreading issues are being addressed by a
professional writer.</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Thank you,</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Best regards</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Alice </div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Bernard Turcotte
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<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, November
13, 2015 12:04 AM<br>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>CCWG - Draft
Update document for CCWG call<br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">All,</div>
<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small"><br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">As per
Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft
Proposal Update document which will be discussed at the
next CCWG meeting.</div>
<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small"><br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">The
document is going to professional formatting as we speak
- so any issues of layout, fonts etc. will be addressed
by a specialist.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">This
document also represents a consideration of all the
comments received with respect to the previous version -
not that all of these were accepted, but a majority were
taken on.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">We
apologize for the lateness of the document, but as you
will notice we have put significant efforts into
recasting this per the comments.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">Bernard
Turcotte</div>
<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">ICANN
Staff Support for the CCWG</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">for the
CCWG Co-chairs.</div>
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Center for Democracy & Technology
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