<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div></div><div><br></div><div><br>On 13 Nov 2015, at 11:40, Alice Jansen <<a href="mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org">alice.jansen@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>As announced on your call #67, this is to kindly remind you that final edits on the attached draft Formal Update (circulated on 12 November) are needed by
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<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Thank you,</div></blockquote><br><div>Dear Alice,</div><div><br></div><div>I just wanted to check you'd received the message copied below and understood it as responsive to this call,</div><div><br></div><div>Kind Regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Malcolm</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">On 12/11/2015 23:04, Bernard Turcotte wrote:<br></span></font></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">All,<br></span></font></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br></span></font></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">As per Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft Proposal<br></span></font></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><font color="#000000"><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">Update document which will be discussed at the next CCWG meeting.</span></font></blockquote><span style="background-color: rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);"><br>There has been a major, unacceptable change between the last revision of<br>this document and this one.<br><br>Concerning the Mission, the previous revision said, on page 30<br><br>The CCWG-Accountability recommends clarifying ICANN’s Mission and Core<br>Values to:<br>* Reinforce the scope of ICANN’s organizational activities related to<br>the Domain Name System (DNS)<br>- ICANN is not to regulate services that use the Internet's unique<br>identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide.<br>- ICANN is to have the ability to enforce agreements with contracted<br>parties (entities that have signed agreements with ICANN in relation to<br>top level domain names)<br><br>That fairly reflected the decision recommendation from the previous<br>draft, at least at the level of detail that appears in this document.<br><br>The new revision just released removes those statements, and in their<br>place says merely<br><br>"The CCWG-Accountability is yet to reach consensus on the proposed<br>language that is intended to address contract enforcement and<br>regulation." (page 21)<br><br>That is not correct. The existing recommendation from our previous draft<br>Report remains intact until replaced. There has been nothing remotely<br>like a consensus to remove it. Please revert to the previous statement.<br><br>Based on Greg's most recent e-mail, of just a couple of hours ago, I<br>think there are grounds for optimism that there WILL be a broadly based<br>consensus to replace the previous text with his new suggestion.<br><br>But if that fails, the fall-back is the existing text, not no text at<br>all. The CCWG's existing recommendation remains until we have consensus<br>to change it.<br><br>It is essential that we follow proper process here, especially on such a<br>crucial issue.<br><br>Malcolm.<br>-- <br> Malcolm Hutty | tel: <a dir="ltr" href="tel:+44%2020%207645%203523" x-apple-data-detectors="true" x-apple-data-detectors-type="telephone" x-apple-data-detectors-result="2">+44 20 7645 3523</a><br> Head of Public Affairs | Read the LINX Public Affairs blog<br>London Internet Exchange | <a dir="ltr" href="http://publicaffairs.linx.net/" x-apple-data-detectors="true" x-apple-data-detectors-type="link" x-apple-data-detectors-result="3">http://publicaffairs.linx.net/</a><br><br> London Internet Exchange Ltd<br> Monument Place, <a dir="ltr" href="x-apple-data-detectors://4/1" x-apple-data-detectors="true" x-apple-data-detectors-type="address" x-apple-data-detectors-result="4/1">24 Monument Street, London EC3R 8AJ</a><br><br> Company Registered in England No. <a dir="ltr" href="tel:3137929" x-apple-data-detectors="true" x-apple-data-detectors-type="telephone" x-apple-data-detectors-result="5">3137929</a><br> Trinity Court, Trinity Street, Peterborough PE1 1DA<br></span><span style="-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;"></span><br style="-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;"></div><div><br></div></body></html>