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<div>I have reviewed the latest draft (on my phone while sitting at the airport in Joao Pessoa) and find it to be a substantial improvement over the previous version. I think it is informative, accurate and I see no significant substantive issues or errors
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<div>I do have one clarifying question. On page 21, under Recommendation #5, Mission bullet #2, the language says, </div>
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<div>What do we mean by the word "provided" in this context? Are we waiting for language from the RSSAC, or do we mean "performed by" the root server operators. Or something different? Apologies but our intent is not clear to me. </div>
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<div>Thanks to all who have worked on this important document. </div>
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<div>Keith</div>
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On Nov 13, 2015, at 11:42 AM, Alice Jansen <<a href="mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org">alice.jansen@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br>
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<div>As announced on your call #67, this is to kindly remind you that final edits on the attached draft Formal Update (circulated on 12 November) are needed by
<u><b>17:00 UTC today</b>.</u></div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">As indicated on the call, no line edits will be taken into account. Co-Chairs are asking for content related comments.</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Per the note below, any format, font and proofreading issues are being addressed by a professional writer.</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Thank you,</div>
<div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); ">Best regards</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Bernard Turcotte <<a href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, November 13, 2015 12:04 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>CCWG - Draft Update document for CCWG call<br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">As per Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft Proposal Update document which will be discussed at the next CCWG meeting.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">The document is going to professional formatting as we speak - so any issues of layout, fonts etc. will be addressed by a specialist.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">This document also represents a consideration of all the comments received with respect to the previous version - not that all of these were accepted, but a majority were taken on.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-size:small">We apologize for the lateness of the document, but as you will notice we have put significant efforts into recasting this per the comments.</div>
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