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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Becky, that’s in important point and I agree with the concern as well. The measuring stick around which consensus has been formed is the limitation on ICANN to act strictly in accordance with, or as reasonably appropriate to achieve, its mission. I also agree with Greg’s follow-up to Milton’s email, as well as the point raised in Malcolm’s email favoring the inclusion of a reference to the services provided by parties to the RA and RAA. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 16, 2015 7:38 PM<br><b>To:</b> Burr, Becky<br><b>Cc:</b> accountability-cross-community@icann.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] SIDE BY SIDE on Regulation/Contract language<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>Becky,<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>I agree with your concern.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal>On Mon, Nov 16, 2015 at 7:08 PM, Burr, Becky <<a href="mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz" target="_blank">Becky.Burr@neustar.biz</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p><div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Following up on this and the comparison I just circulated, and putting aside my rapporteur hat for a moment, I believe that Milton’s proposal to change “in furtherance of its Mission” to “insofar as those agreements are consistent with its Mission” moves us backwards. We have articulated a clear and limited Mission. We have stated that ICANN may act only in accordance with and as reasonably appropriate to achieve its Mission. Registrar Accreditation Agreements and Registry Agreements are commercial agreements between registrars and ICANN and registries and ICANN. While I do support </span><span style='font-family:"Avenir Book","serif"'>established means of community input on those agreements and reasonable checks and balances on ICANN's ability to impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s Mission on registries and registrars, I do not support open ended language that creates ongoing uncertainty about whether such contracts are enforceable. </span><o:p></o:p></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:12.0pt;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;color:black'>J. 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So again, I ask, what is wrong with this?</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black'>ICANN shall act strictly in accordance with, and only as reasonably appropriate to</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>,</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black'> achieve its Mission. Without limiting the foregoing:</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><ul type=disc><li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>ICANN shall not impose regulations on:</span><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></li></ul><ul type=disc><ul type=circle><li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Information </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>services which use the Internet’s unique identifiers</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> but are not registries or registrars</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>, or</span><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>T</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>he content that such services carry or provide</span><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul></ul><ul type=disc><li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>ICANN shall have the ability to enter into and enforce agreements with contracted parties, </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>insofar as those agreements are consistent with </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>its Mission. </span><span style='font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;background-image:initial;background-repeat:initial'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt'><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black'> <a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 16, 2015 5:47 PM<br><b>To:</b> Andrew Sullivan<br><b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] SIDE BY SIDE on Regulation/Contract language</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>I sent an email Saturday in an attempt to move the ball on this provision -- particularly on the provision that Andrew highlights. Since it may have gotten lost in the email blizzard, I am pasting it in here as well. </span></i><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><i><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Greg</span></i><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>This topic was just discussed extensively on the call yesterday and there was considerable progress. The recordings, notes, chat and call transcripts are all available now at <a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D56145283&d=CwMGaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=RuURmV3O5rw2xc5BBd-rOGy3VmtvsbpF9jJ0MNEF61E&s=2B_pxB-lUI7HFZBwXpjNiTIxvxwmEmgndnm-grRZd3w&e=" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=56145283</a>. The relevant discussion is on pp. 4-19 of the call transcript. It's important to read the whole section, but the concluding remarks from that discussion are helpful for us to build on:</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><blockquote style='margin-left:30.0pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></blockquote><blockquote style='margin-left:30.0pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'>Becky Burr: Well, no, I mean, I think that the point is - and Greg has just echoed me in this - what we are talking about is services, not service providers. So the question is what is the underlying service, not what is the nature of the business. So I guess I agree with - I agree with the way it is set up in this language here.<br> <br>Thomas Rickert: Yes, and I guess that what you’ve just refined is a better description of what Greg I think meant by saying differing classes of services - class of businesses. So I guess that’s helpful. So I think we can confirm and please let me know if you do not agree with this, that that we are looking for a technology-neutral description of this.<br> <br> But still if we’re using the technique that Kavouss has suggested, for example, we could have examples of technology to illustrate what we mean by the definition that should then go - or by the language that should then go into the bylaws. Alan, you’ve raised your hand.<br> <br>Alan Greenberg: Yeah, thank you. It [dawns] on me that when we're looking at the two classes of service, someone may be offering a graphics design service over the web. Clearly, we are never saying we are going to be regulating the graphics design service. So at some level we could not - we don’t have to differentiate because we’re - the higher level service is always carved out. But since the word has two different very distinct meanings it’s probably better to be clear. Thank you.<br> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'>Thomas Rickert: Thanks very much, Alan. And I think that these are excellent final words on this conversation. So I think this is as far as we can get during this call. And with that I’d like to thank you all for your contributions and for bearing with us for those who are not calling this their favorite item. And let’s now move to the next agenda item which is going to be chaired by Mathieu.</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Andrew Sullivan had two suggested revisions to the first part of the provision</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>, both of which are consistent with this direction:</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>·</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:blue'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>ICANN</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> shall not impose regulations on </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>services (i.e., any software process that accepts</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>connections from the Internet) that use the Internet’s unique</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>identifiers, or</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> the content that such services carry or provide</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#500050'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>or, alternatively</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>·</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:blue'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>ICANN</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> shall not impose regulations on </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>services (i.e., any software process that accepts datagrams from the Internet, when those datagrams are not themselves necessarily the consequence of a datagram previously sent by the software process itself) that use the Internet’s unique identifiers, or</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> the content that such services carry or provide</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>These parentheticals are both more "technically neutral" than the parenthetical I circulated ("(i.e., the software processes by which commands received via the Internet are processed and a response is generated and transmitted via the Internet, to be viewed in a web browser, email client, or the like")). I tend to prefer the first one, which has the virtue of brevity. That said, we should see if there are tweaks consistent with Thomas's summary of the call "</span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'>we’re not talking about the service providers or the class of business that they're in but that we're talking about the technical processes, the technical services.</span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>"</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Another suggestion came from Milton Mueller:</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>·</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:blue'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>ICANN</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> shall not impose regulations on </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>Information services which use the Internet’s unique identifiers but are not registries or registrars, or</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>t</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>he content that such services carry or provide</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>In response to James Bladel, Milton suggests "</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Instead of saying “registries or registrars” we could simply say “under the Registrar Accreditation Agreement (RAA) or the Registry Agreement (RA).”</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>·</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:blue'> </span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>ICANN</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> shall not impose regulations on </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>Information services which use the Internet’s unique identifiers but are not under the Registrar Accreditation Agreement (RAA) or the Registry Agreement (RA), or</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>t</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:blue'>he content that such services carry or provide</span></b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Although "information services" could be preferable to "services," the first suggestion clearly takes us away from describing "technical processes" and instead describes "service providers" since it refers to "registries or registrars" as the kind of thing that would be included as "information services" (unless carved out). The second suggestion is not as clearly about "service providers" but it's also not clearly about "technical services" either (there's not enough information to read it clearly). </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Perhaps there's a way to combine these various thoughts in a manner consistent with the overall direction, for instance in the following synthesis:</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#0B5394'>·</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:#0B5394'> </span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>ICANN</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'> shall not impose regulations on:</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#0B5394'>o</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:#0B5394'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>Information services (i.e., any software process that accepts</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>connections from the Internet) that use the Internet’s unique identifiers, other than those covered by the Registrar Accreditation Agreement (RAA) or the Registry Agreement (RA), or</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#0B5394'>o</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:#0B5394'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>t</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>he content that such information services carry or provide</span></b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>or, alternatively (if the carve-out for the RAA/RA seems confusing, unnecessary or overbroad) </span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#0B5394'>·</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:#0B5394'> </span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>ICANN</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:47.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'> shall not impose regulations on:</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#0B5394'>o</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:#0B5394'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>Information services (i.e., any software process that accepts</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>connections from the Internet) that use the Internet’s unique identifiers, or</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'> </span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New";color:#0B5394'>o</span><span style='font-size:7.0pt;color:#0B5394'> </span><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'></span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>t</span></b><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:83.25pt'><b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'>he content that such information services carry or provide</span></b><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#0B5394'></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'></span><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>In order to focus this email, I haven't touched on the second sentence, which we should finalize as well.</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>I look forward to your thoughts.</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Greg</span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='color:black'>On Mon, Nov 16, 2015 at 5:27 PM, Andrew Sullivan <<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p><blockquote style='border:none;border-left:solid #CCCCCC 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 6.0pt;margin-left:4.8pt;margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='color:black'>On Mon, Nov 16, 2015 at 10:15:31PM +0000, Burr, Becky wrote:<br>> I am recirculating the slide that compares the 2nd Draft Report language with alternative language discussed on our last call. Although some who participated in the discussion found the definition of services to be a bit clunky, folks generally felt that this language could work as direction to drafters. We need to reach closure on this issue.<br>><br><br>With my usual disclaimer in place, I really strongly advise against<br>the "to be viewed" &c. language. I sent an alternative and I think<br>there were some other suggestions as well. They're all much more<br>neutral with respect to technology.<br></span><span style='color:#888888'><br>A<br><span class=hoenzb>--</span><br><span class=hoenzb>Andrew Sullivan</span><br><span class=hoenzb><a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com" target="_blank">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a></span><br><span class=hoenzb>_______________________________________________</span><br><span class=hoenzb>Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list</span><br><span class=hoenzb><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" target="_blank">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a></span><br><span class=hoenzb><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__mm.icann.org_mailman_listinfo_accountability-2Dcross-2Dcommunity&d=CwMGaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=RuURmV3O5rw2xc5BBd-rOGy3VmtvsbpF9jJ0MNEF61E&s=FClqdT_MP4lKv09m4ckfr4t67wGmgiChmfM0eOYpiks&e=" target="_blank">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a></span></span><span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p></blockquote></div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></div></div></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><br>_______________________________________________<br>Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community" target="_blank">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><o:p></o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p>=================================================================<br><b><i><span style='color:red'>Reminder: Any email that requests your login credentials or that asks you to click on a link could be a phishing attack. 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