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<div>One principle that Greg and I brought up regards Advisory Committee formal advice:</div>
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<li>Advice should be clear as to whether the advice is supporting or opposing a proposed policy or action. </li><li>Advice should include a rationale for the decision</li></ol>
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<div>This could go in the Bylaws Article XI, section 1, applying to all Advisory Committees.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Mathieu Weill <<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr">mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Tuesday, November 24, 2015 at 8:51 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [CCWG-ACCT] What happened to the "Principles" section of the Second Draft?<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Dear Greg,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">I noticed your comment, and your concern and compared versions.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">It seems to me that the Principles section of the 2<sup>nd</sup> draft is appropriately captured in Recommendation #5 in the summary,
as well as in annex 5. Some is also captured in the Human rights section of course.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Could you elaborate about the specific elements of the 2<sup>nd</sup> report that you are missing ?
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Best<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Mathieu<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">De :</span></b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">
<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>De la part de</b> Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Envoyé :</b> lundi 23 novembre 2015 16:33<br>
<b>À :</b> <a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Objet :</b> [CCWG-ACCT] What happened to the "Principles" section of the Second Draft?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">In reviewing the Third Draft, the "Principles" section of the Second Draft seems to have disappeared entirely. This section contained a number of important parts of our proposal, and is
an integral part of the overall proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">I anticipate a response that these recommendations have somehow been parceled out and absorbed into other sections of the Third Draft, but even a spot-check show that this is clearly not the
case. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">It appears that our quest for readability has resulted in significant and difficult to find changes to the substance of our proposals. This undermines the proposal as a whole and makes the
job of reviewing this draft much harder.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">I am deeply concerned. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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