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Greg — The two questions you raise are closely related, I think.</div>
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Para 21 is the one with footnote 2. It reads: </div>
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<div><font face="Calibri,sans-serif">Community stakeholder groups should appoint their own representatives to Review Teams. Regarding composition and size of review teams, based on composition of prior Review Teams, 21 ReviewTeam members from Supporting Organizations
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While I did not have footnote 2 in my submission for para 21, it seems the document editors intended to refer to the table showing participation in previous AoC Reviews (para 128-164). </div>
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It should be easy to repair the missing link during proofreading. </div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, December 4, 2015 at 11:01 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[CCWG-ACCT] Two Questions on Annex 9<br>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have two questions on Annex 9 (AoC Reviews):</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">1. Footnote 2 is empty. What is supposed to be there? (Para 21)</div>
<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">2. There is a table showing the composition of past AoC review teams. There is no introduction or explanatory text associated with this table. What is the significance of the table supposed
to be? (Paras. 128-164)</div>
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<div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Thanks!</div>
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