<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Avenir, sans-serif;"><div><div>Hi Holly, Greg,</div><div><br></div><div>Thank you for pointing these out, we will flag them to the proofreader. </div><div><br></div><div>As mentioned in the timeline and next steps email sent by León on 19 November (attached), the CCWG-Accountability does have a professional proofreader/editor going through the document to ensure that any minor details are fixed and addressed as the group finalizes the proposal moving forward. </div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Hillary</div><div><br></div><div>-- </div><div><div><div><b>Hillary Jett</b></div><div>Communications Coordinator</div><div>Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</div><div><br></div><div>Mobile: +1 (202) 674-3403</div><div>Email: <a href="mailto:hillary.jett@icann.org">hillary.jett@icann.org</a></div><div style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif;"><br></div></div><div style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif;"><div style="font-family: Arial; font-size: medium;"><br></div></div></div></div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> <<a href="mailto:acct-staff-bounces@icann.org">acct-staff-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of "Gregory, Holly" <<a href="mailto:holly.gregory@sidley.com">holly.gregory@sidley.com</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Monday, December 7, 2015 at 2:27 PM<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span> ACCT-Staff <<a href="mailto:acct-staff@icann.org">acct-staff@icann.org</a>>, "Rosemary E. Fei" <<a href="mailto:rfei@adlercolvin.com">rfei@adlercolvin.com</a>>, CCWG-Accountability <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Re: [Acct-Staff] [CCWG-ACCT] Two Questions on Annex 9<br></div><div><br></div><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; display: inline !important; float: none;">In a document this size and with so many moving pieces there are bound to be some glitches. I think these are minor in nature, but it does underscore the value in using this time to have someone go through and do a thorough proof read to identify anything that needs to be fixed for the next draft. </span></span></body></html>