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Agree with David and Milton - clarity is key<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 08/12/2015 14:00, Mueller, Milton L
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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is a substantive issue. Please put the words that were
agreed back in, as David suggests.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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mission statement is important<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Seun Ojedeji<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 8, 2015 1:25 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> David Post <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:david.g.post@gmail.com"><david.g.post@gmail.com></a><br>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] An Inadvertent
Omission in Annex 5 - Mission Statement<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p>DNS is already a starting reference point and there is a
colon (:) after policies then you have item "a" which talks
about security and/or stability.....<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>So it seem in order to me. Nevertheless the professional
proof reader may want to have a look.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>Regards<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Dec 8, 2015 2:45 AM, "David Post"
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wrote:.<br>
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ICANN's Mission, "in its role of coordinat[ing] the
allocation and assignment of names in the root zone of the
Domain Name System ("DNS")," is to<br>
"coordinate the development and implementation of
policies:<br>
[a] For which uniform or coordinated resolution is
reasonably necessary to facilitate the openness,
interoperability, resilience, security and/or stability;
and<br>
[b] That are developed through a bottom-up,
consensus-based multi-stakeholder process and designed to
ensure the stable and secure operation of the Internet's
unique names systems."<br>
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I believe that the words "of the DNS" should follow
"security and/or stability" .... That's correct, no?
[otherwise it doesn't make sense -- the "openness" etc. of
what?]<br>
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David<br>
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