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At 01:25 AM 12/8/2015, Seun Ojedeji wrote:<br><br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">DNS is already a starting
reference point and there is a colon (:) after policies then you have
item "a" which talks about security and/or
stability.....<br><br>
So it seem in order to me. Nevertheless the professional proof reader may
want to have a look.<br>
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But using the phrase "to faciltate THE openness," -- as though
I were to say "my job is to facilitate the openness ..."
- doesn't make sense without answering "the openness of
what?" <br><br>
I think we're all in agreement that it's the openness, stabiity, etc. of
the DNS. So we should say that directly, adding the words "of
the DNS" at the end.<br><br>
David<br><br>
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<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite="">On Dec 8, 2015 2:45 AM,
"David Post"
<<a href="mailto:david.g.post@gmail.com">david.g.post@gmail.com</a>
> wrote:<br>
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<dd>I believe that some (important) words have been inadvertently omitted
from the Mission Statement in Annex 5. It currently
reads:<br><br>
<dd>ICANN's Mission, "in its role of coordinat[ing] the
allocation and assignment of names in the root zone of the Domain Name
System ("DNS")," is to<br>
<dd>"coordinate the development and implementation of policies:<br>
<dd>[a] For which uniform or coordinated resolution is reasonably
necessary to facilitate the openness, interoperability, resilience,
security and/or stability; and<br>
<dd>[b] That are developed through a bottom-up, consensus-based
multi-stakeholder process and designed to ensure the stable and secure
operation of the Internet's unique names systems."<br><br>
<dd>I believe that the words "of the DNS" should follow
"security and/or stability" .... That's correct, no? [otherwise
it doesn't make sense -- the "openness" etc. of what?]<br><br>
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