<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Dear Co-Chairs</div><div id="AppleMailSignature"><br></div><div id="AppleMailSignature">maybe rushing things isn't such a good idea after all.</div><div id="AppleMailSignature"><br></div><div id="AppleMailSignature">el</div><div id="AppleMailSignature"><br>-- <div>Sent from Dr Lisse's iPad mini</div></div><div><br>On 20 Dec 2015, at 07:10, Rosemary E. Fei <<a href="mailto:rfei@adlercolvin.com">rfei@adlercolvin.com</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">Dear CCWG:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">To confirm our comprehension of the CCWG’s decisions on the many changes from the Second to the Third Proposal, we reviewed the Third Proposal as published. In
doing so, we noted points where the language in the Third Proposal does not unambiguously reflect our current substantive understanding of the CCWG’s intent. In our comments on the Third Proposal draft, we suggested edits on many of these points which were
not accepted, so perhaps we have misunderstood the intent. As to other points, we don’t have a clear understanding of the CCWG’s intent. In either case, we would like clarification.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">In the attached table you will find our joint substantive comments on the Third Proposal as published. As we approach the implementation stage, we would welcome
an opportunity to discuss any of our comments that raise questions or concerns, to ensure we know what we’re asked to implement. We also hope these comments may be useful to clarify the final proposal for the general reader.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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