<div dir="ltr"><div>Dear All,</div><div>I have made some analysis of Annex D to the draft Bylaws and found a serious misunderstanding on. how EC powers should be translated / converted into legal </div><div>terms/provision for inclusion in the Bylaws </div><div>My comments are attached </div><div>Regards</div><div>Kavouss </div><div>---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Kavouss Arasteh</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com">kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com</a>></span><br>Date: 2016-04-08 8:32 GMT+02:00<br>Subject: Re: [bylaws-coord] Corrected Bylaws document - 2 April 2016 version, as corrected on 7 April 2016<br>To: Samantha Eisner <<a href="mailto:Samantha.Eisner@icann.org">Samantha.Eisner@icann.org</a>>, Holly Gregory <<a href="mailto:holly.gregory@sidley.com">holly.gregory@sidley.com</a>>, "Rosemary E. Fei" <<a href="mailto:rfei@adlercolvin.com">rfei@adlercolvin.com</a>>, Mathieu Weill <<a href="mailto:Mathieu.Weill@afnic.fr">Mathieu.Weill@afnic.fr</a>>, Thomas Rickert <<a href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net">thomas@rickert.net</a>>, León Felipe Sánchez Ambía <<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>>, "<<a href="mailto:Thomas.Schneider@bakom.admin.ch">Thomas.Schneider@bakom.admin.ch</a>>" <<a href="mailto:Thomas.Schneider@bakom.admin.ch">Thomas.Schneider@bakom.admin.ch</a>>, Olga Cavalli <<a href="mailto:olgacavalli@gmail.com">olgacavalli@gmail.com</a>>, Pedro Ivo Ferraz da Silva <<a href="mailto:pedro.ivo@itamaraty.gov.br">pedro.ivo@itamaraty.gov.br</a>>, "<<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>>" <<a href="mailto:Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch">Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch</a>>, "<<a href="mailto:Sabine.Meyer@bmwi.bund.de">Sabine.Meyer@bmwi.bund.de</a>>" <<a href="mailto:Sabine.Meyer@bmwi.bund.de">Sabine.Meyer@bmwi.bund.de</a>>, "<<a href="mailto:gac-leadership@icann.org">gac-leadership@icann.org</a>>" <<a href="mailto:gac-leadership@icann.org">gac-leadership@icann.org</a>><br>Cc: "<a href="mailto:bylaws-coord@icann.org">bylaws-coord@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:bylaws-coord@icann.org">bylaws-coord@icann.org</a>>, ICANN-Adler <<a href="mailto:ICANN@adlercolvin.com">ICANN@adlercolvin.com</a>>, Sidley ICANN CCWG <<a href="mailto:sidleyicannccwg@sidley.com">sidleyicannccwg@sidley.com</a>><br><br><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="auto"><div>Dear Samantha</div><div>Pls kindly convey my message sent last night on how reflect the Carve- Out in the Bylaws in exact quotation of the texts as contained in Recs. 1&2 by creating to distinct and specific provision in that regard without going through a very heavy drafting which may intentionally it unintentionally expand the very limited occurrence of that circumstances.</div><div>I have serious concerns and strong objections to the existing draft in that relations</div><div>Tks</div><div>Kavouss <br><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><div class="h5"><div><br>On 7 Apr 2016, at 23:02, Samantha Eisner via bylaws-coord <<a href="mailto:bylaws-coord@icann.org" target="_blank">bylaws-coord@icann.org</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
<div>Dear Bylaws Coordination Group - </div>
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<div>In our reviews of the document since circulation on Sunday, the attorneys have identified a set of items that were unintentionally omitted from the document as it was being prepared for distribution, as well as a few typos and minor corrections that needed
to be addressed based upon the language agreed over the weekend. </div>
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<div>These updates do not address the items that have been under discussion in this group, the CWG or the CCWG. We are all continuing to follow those discussions so that changes can be incorporated into a new version.</div>
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<div>The clean up items that are reflected in the attached track changes version are:</div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">a)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.2(f) - inserted omitted provision</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">b)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(v) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">c)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(w) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">d)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(d) - busted section reference (no longer a provision for Community
IRP in Bylaws; assuming it should just be reference to Community IRP in Annex D)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">e)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(e) - busted section reference (no longer a provision for Community
IRP in Bylaws; assuming it should just be reference to Community IRP in Annex D)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">f)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">6.1(c) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">g)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">7.24 - inserted omitted provision
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">h)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">7.25 - inserted omitted provision
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">i)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">8.1 - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">j)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">9.2(b) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">11.3(f) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">k)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">16.3 - inserted omitted provision
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">l)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">18.1 - updated section reference</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">m)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">18.9(a) words missing at the end "shall be the action of the IFRT."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">n)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">19.1(c)(i) first sentence should be "An SCWG Creation Approval shall
become effective..."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">o)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">19.1(c)(ii) first sentence should be "An SCWG Creation Approval that
has been rejected..."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">p)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">19.7(a) words missing at the end "shall be the action of the SCWG."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">q)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">25.2 – Fixed heading<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">r)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">27.2(c)(iii) - inserted omitted provision</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">s)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Annex D, Section 1.4(b)(ii) – fixed threshold reference from “two
or more” to “<b><u>three</u></b> or more”<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">t)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Annex E, Section 1(e) - typo</span></p>
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<span style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><br>
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<span style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Thanks, </span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Sam Eisner</span></p>
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