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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Also, related to this, shouldn’t the recommendation in 2.3 propose adding this language to the bylaws?
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<p class="Default"><span style="font-size:11.5pt">“…as long as these renewals did not include any new terms. Any new terms would need to be within the scope and mission of ICANN.”</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Mueller, Milton L<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 6, 2016 2:16 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard@gmail.com>; Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Response to Public Consultation on New Bylaws - 72 hour consultation for the CCWG-Accountability<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Bernard<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">One quick comment.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I was pleased to see the renewals of the RA/RAA flagged in 2.2. I think the comment is attempting to do the right thing, but I find the language phrased in a
way that seems to create an unintentional ambiguity.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="Default"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79">Under 2.2 you say:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="Default"><span style="font-size:11.5pt">“…as long as these renewals did not include any new term based on previously agreed language. Any new terms would however need to be within the scope and mission of ICANN.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="Default"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79">I do not understand the function or intent of the words “based on previously agreed language.” If the language is previously agreed, how can it be a new term? Did
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<p class="Default"><span style="font-size:11.5pt">“…as long as these renewals did not include any new terms. Any new terms would need to be within the scope and mission of ICANN.”</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">--MM<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">
<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org">mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bernard Turcotte<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 6, 2016 11:36 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Response to Public Consultation on New Bylaws - 72 hour consultation for the CCWG-Accountability<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">All,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As discussed on the call this week please find attached the draft response of the CCWG-Accountability to the public consultation on the new Bylaws.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This document was developed from the meeting notes of our call on May 3rd and reviewed by the leadership team.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As discussed at that meeting we are providing the CCWG-Accountability a 72 hour comment period on this draft response <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">beginning 1800UTC Friday May 6th and closing 1800UTC Monday May 9th.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please post your comments to the main CCWG-Accountability list, used to send this email, and please use the same SUBJECT to <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">facilitate tracking of comments (or simply REPLY to this email).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Bernard Turcotte<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">ICANN Staff Support for the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs<o:p></o:p></p>
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