<div dir="ltr"><div>Milton,</div><div>Neither Bernard nor your edits are responding to the concerns </div><div>You proposed </div><div>Quote </div><div><font size="3">as long as these renewals did not include any new terms. Any new terms would need to be within the scope and mission of ICANN</font></div><div><font size="3">Unquote</font></div><div><font size="3">What does it mean pls</font></div><div><font size="3">Kavouss </font></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-05-06 20:16 GMT+02:00 Mueller, Milton L <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:milton@gatech.edu" target="_blank">milton@gatech.edu</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;font-size:11pt">One quick comment.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:rgb(31,73,125);font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;font-size:11pt">I was pleased to see the renewals of the RA/RAA flagged in 2.2. I think the comment is attempting to do the right thing, but I find the language phrased in a
way that seems to create an unintentional ambiguity.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p><span style="color:rgb(31,78,121);font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;font-size:11pt"><span style="color:windowtext">Under 2.2 you say:<u></u><u></u></span></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.5pt">“…as long as these renewals did not include any new term based on previously agreed language. Any new terms would however need to be within the scope and mission of ICANN.”<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p><span style="color:rgb(31,78,121);font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;font-size:11pt"><span style="color:windowtext">I do not understand the function or intent of the words
“based on previously agreed language.” If the language is previously agreed, how can it be a new term? Did you mean to simply say:<u></u><u></u></span></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.5pt">“…as long as these renewals did not include any new terms. Any new terms would need to be within the scope and mission of ICANN.”</span><span style="color:rgb(31,78,121);font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;font-size:11pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bernard Turcotte<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 6, 2016 11:36 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Accountability Cross Community <<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Response to Public Consultation on New Bylaws - 72 hour consultation for the CCWG-Accountability<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As discussed on the call this week please find attached the draft response of the CCWG-Accountability to the public consultation on the new Bylaws.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This document was developed from the meeting notes of our call on May 3rd and reviewed by the leadership team.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As discussed at that meeting we are providing the CCWG-Accountability a 72 hour comment period on this draft response <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">beginning 1800UTC Friday May 6th and closing 1800UTC Monday May 9th.<u></u><u></u></p>
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