<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hi Niels,<div class="">while I stand by the assessment that the different language does not have a legal impact, I was not referring to a decision made by the lawyers, but by our group based on the lawyer’s input.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best,</div><div class="">Thomas</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">Am 21.05.2016 um 12:19 schrieb Niels ten Oever <<a href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net" class="">lists@nielstenoever.net</a>>:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Hi Thomas,</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Am not sure if it is procedurally a good idea to have the lawyers make</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">decisions on behalf of the CCWG, especially if there was consensus in</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">the CCWG.</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Also I think 'until' implies a temporal condition, whereas unless</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">implies a categorical condition, which I think is structurally different.</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Best,</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Niels</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><span style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">On 05/18/2016 09:26 AM, Thomas Rickert wrote:</span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=""><blockquote type="cite" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class="">Hi Niels,<br class="">we had been advised by our law firms that there is no real legal<br class="">difference between the two alternatives, which is why the comment has<br class="">not made its way into the final version of the CCWG comment if memory<br class="">does not fail me. If you still think this needs fixing, please do submit<br class="">a comment to bring it to the attention of the drafting teams.<br class=""><br class="">Thanks,<br class="">Thomas<br class=""><br class="">---<br class=""><a href="http://rickert.net/" class="">rickert.net</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><<a href="http://rickert.net/" class="">http://rickert.net</a>><br class=""><a href="http://eco.de/" class="">eco.de</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><<a href="http://eco.de/" class="">http://eco.de</a>><br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Am 17.05.2016 um 10:36 schrieb Niels ten Oever <<a href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net" class="">lists@nielstenoever.net</a><br class=""><<a href="mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net" class="">mailto:lists@nielstenoever.net</a>>>:<br class=""><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class="">Dear Mathieu,<br class=""><br class="">Thanks for this. There is an issue related to the Human Rights bylaw,<br class="">which we have discussed and on which I think we reach agreement that has<br class="">not been addressed in the CCWG public comment. Namely the comment made<br class="">by Seth underneath, the exclusion of the text "unless and", about which<br class="">I thought we reached consensus.<br class=""><br class="">Since the CCWG comments have already been submitted, how would you<br class="">advice to proceed on this matter?<br class=""><br class="">Best,<br class=""><br class="">Niels<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">On 05/13/2016 07:45 PM, Seth Johnson wrote:<br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class="">Note for all: This does not address the inclusion of "unless and" in<br class="">Section 27.3 (a), which makes the FOI on HR conditional and does not<br class="">reflect the CCWG Report which only says the Core Value is not in force<br class="">"until" the FOI is developed. Already said this, with some support.<br class="">Repeating for reference once again.<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Seth<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">On Fri, May 13, 2016 at 12:23 PM, Mathieu Weill<br class=""><<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr" class="">mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr" class="">mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a>>> wrote:<br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class="">Dear Colleagues,<br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Attached is the comment posted to the public comment forum on the Draft<br class="">Icann Bylaws on our behalf. Thanks to all of you for contributing to<br class="">this<br class="">effort.<br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><a href="https://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/" class="">https://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/</a><br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Best<br class=""><br class="">Thomas, Leon & Mathieu<br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><br class="">De : Mathieu Weill [mailto:weill@afnic.fr]<br class="">Envoyé : vendredi 13 mai 2016 18:19<br class="">À : '<a href="mailto:comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16@icann.org" class="">comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16@icann.org</a><br class=""><<a href="mailto:comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16@icann.org" class="">mailto:comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16@icann.org</a>>'<br class="">Objet : CCWG Accountability comment<br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Please find enclosed the comment submitted on behalf of the Cross<br class="">Community<br class="">Working Group en Enhancing Icann’s Accountability.<br class=""><br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Best regards,<br class=""><br class="">Thomas Rickert, Leon Felipe Sanchez and Mathieu Weill<br class=""><br class="">Co-chairs<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">_______________________________________________<br class="">Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" class="">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br class=""><<a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" class="">mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a>><br class=""><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community" class="">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><br class=""><br class=""></blockquote></blockquote><br class="">--<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class="">Niels ten Oever<br class="">Head of Digital<br class=""><br class="">Article 19<br class=""><a href="http://www.article19.org/" class="">www.article19.org</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><<a href="http://www.article19.org/" class="">http://www.article19.org</a>><br class=""><br class="">PGP fingerprint 8D9F C567 BEE4 A431 56C4<br class=""> 678B 08B5 A0F2 636D 68E9<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">_______________________________________________<br class="">Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" class="">Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a><br class=""><<a href="mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org" class="">mailto:Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org</a>><br class=""><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community" class="">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community</a><br class=""></blockquote></blockquote><br style="font-family: Helvetica; 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