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<p>I agree that it is also desirable to see clean and redlined
versions prior to Board consideration.<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/22/2016 4:28 PM, Alan Greenberg
wrote:<br>
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I had asked if the revised draft after factoring in comments would
be
available for review prior to Board consideration. I do not
believe I
received a positive answer. I am glad to hear that you too think
it is
advisable.<br>
<br>
I presume that this redline version will also contain other
changes
(typos, other fixes) noted during the review period (the lawyers
have
indicated they do have a list of such revisions).<br>
<br>
Given that, the need for any changes to text which is unchanged
from the
current draft would need to be pretty onerous to be considered at
that
time!<br>
<br>
Alan<br>
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At 22/05/2016 11:14 AM, Greg Shatan wrote:<br>
<br>
<blockquote type="cite" class="cite" cite="">The comment period
for the draft
just closed 15 hours ago. Those comments (which include the
comments of
the CCWG) and comments from counsel need to be duly taken into
account
and the draft revised accordingly. This is clearly going to
happen on a
fast track, but not quite that fast....<br>
<br>
I would expect (and request) that the revised draft appear in
both clean
and "redlined" form so the changes can be clearly seen and
reviewed. <br>
<br>
I expect these changes to be rather constrained. I strongly
recommend that anyone who wants to review the "final" draft
should review the current draft (if they have not done so
already) and
then review the limited changes when they're released. Waiting
for
the final draft to dig in would not be the most prudent
approach. Of
course, everyone has their own work style, and if one wants to
drink from
the firehose at the last minute, have fun....<br>
<br>
Greg<br>
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On Sunday, May 22, 2016, Chartier, Mike S
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<dd>Has the final text that the Board will approve on the 27th
been
posted yet?<br>
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<dd>Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Agenda for ICANN Board meeting on 27
May
2016<br>
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<dd>Agenda | Special Meeting of the ICANN Board<br>
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<dd>27 May 2016<br>
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<dd>Main Agenda<br>
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<dd>* Approval of New ICANN Bylaws for IANA Stewardship
Transition<br>
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