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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I keep trying to figure out how ICANN is supposed to operate on Day 1 of the amended By-Laws given that actions must be taken by the Board and further given
 that the bottom-up multistakeholder process to determine the Global Public Interest on particular issues takes years.&nbsp; Is Global Public Interest to be considered in connection with each PDP?&nbsp; Is there to be a separate PDP on defining &nbsp;Global Public Interest?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Could &nbsp;the Board frozen from acting on issues, e.g. the Red Cross, unless and until the GPI is finally determined in this regard?&nbsp; Would they be in violation
 of the new By-Laws for voting one way or the other on this?&nbsp; Same question as to geo names.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">To my mind there is still a massive fiction going on to the effect that the Board does not make policy decisions or determine the Global Public Interest.&nbsp; It
 is absolutely inherent in the very structure of ICANN that the Board will receive potentially conflicting policy advice and will have to be the arbiter of such advice.&nbsp; Why have any “thresholds” for overturning either GNSO or GAC advice if this were untrue?&nbsp;
 The Board also receives advice directly from ALAC and from other sources, e.g. the European Commission.&nbsp; Nothing about the Accountabilty work changes this basic fact. The work just says that if enough people object to action taken by the Board, there is a
 mechanism for addressing that.&nbsp; Are we to suppose that it is in fact the processes available in the Empowered Community as a result of the Accountability work that will define the Global Public Interest “from time to time”?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I am especially confused by the use of this &nbsp;language “from time to time’ with respect to determinations of the Global Public&nbsp; Interest.&nbsp; Although the community
 is making efforts to cooperate and communicate early as to policy matters, there really is not a set mechanism at present (nor will there be at the time of the IANA Transition) to measure Board action or hold the Board accountable to acting in the Global Public
 Interest because no one has defined it.&nbsp; In this regard, it is actually unfair to Board members to expect them to act in the absence of an express standard that has been developed by the Community.&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;I think that if I were a Board member, I might refuse to
 act or to vote on an issue by simply saying, “well, I have to comply with the By-Laws but the GPI with respect to this issue has not yet been determined by the bottom-up Multistakeholder process.”&nbsp;&nbsp; Everyone acknowledges no definition of GPI is agreed at present.&nbsp;
 Why does anyone assume that ICANN can operate effectively on Day 1 of the new By-Laws?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Lastly, I think it would be a &nbsp;“darned shame” if Holly and Rosemary did not opine on the final language that is recommended around the GPI, if only to prevent
 lawsuits against the SOs and ACs and their officers.&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Anne<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, July 07, 2016 6:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> matthew shears<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Accountability Cross Community; Thomas Rickert<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Matthew,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">How would you suggest revising my proposed language?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Thanks!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Thu, Jul 7, 2016 at 3:00 AM, matthew shears &lt;<a href="mailto:mshears@cdt.org" target="_blank">mshears@cdt.org</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>Thanks Greg.&nbsp; But, why would we not use the langugage we've agreed in the new Bylaws as it relates to GPI?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p style="margin-bottom:1.4pt"><span style="font-size:11.5pt">2.2.1. CCWG-Accountability Final Recommendation 1, para 51: The Articles of Incorporation will be amended to clarify that
<b>the global public interest will be determined through a bottom-up, multistakeholder process</b>.
</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.5pt">2.2.2. CCWG-Accountability Final Recommendation 5, para 153 (core values) 2: Seeking and supporting broad, informed participation reflecting the functional, geographic, and cultural
 diversity of the Internet at all levels of policy development and decision-making
<b>to ensure that the bottom-up, multistakeholder policy development process is used to ascertain the global public interest
</b>and that those processes are accountable and transparent. <br>
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Thanks.<span style="color:#888888"><br>
<span class="hoenzb">Matthew</span></span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 07/07/2016 06:05, Greg Shatan wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">For added clarity, I propose the following change:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><u><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Original Language in Revised Bylaws</span></u></b><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">:</span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">the Corporation shall, except as limited by Article 54 hereof, pursue the charitable and public purposes of lessening the burdens of government and promoting the global public interest in the operational
 stability of the Internet</span><b><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:red">,</span></b><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">&nbsp;as such global public interest may be determined from time to time by the multistakeholder community through an inclusive bottom-up
 multistakeholder community process</span><b><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:red">,</span></b><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black"> by carrying out the mission set forth in the bylaws of the Corporation&nbsp;(“<b>Bylaws</b>”).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">the Corporation shall, except as limited by Article 54 hereof, pursue the charitable and public purposes of lessening the burdens of government and promoting the global public interest in the operational
 stability of the Internet&nbsp;by carrying out the mission set forth in the bylaws of the Corporation&nbsp;(“<b>Bylaws</b>”).&nbsp;<i>Such global public interest may be determined from time to time.&nbsp; Any determination of such global public interest shall be made by the multistakeholder
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 language above) and then try to &quot;unpack&quot; that phrase into sentences.&nbsp; Thrusting this phrase in the middle of the sentence was clearly causing two comprehension problems, even though the drafting was technically correct.&nbsp; In addition to the previously discussed
 comprehension problem around the word &quot;may,&quot; the mid-sentence insertion of the phrase obscured the connection between the final words (&quot;by carrying out the mission...&quot;) and the thought that it was completing (&quot;the Corporation shall ... pursue the charitable
 and public purposes of [x] and [y]...&quot;).&nbsp; Removing the inserted phrase makes the primary narrative thrust of the sentence clear: &quot;<b>the Corporation shall ... pursue the charitable and public purposes of [x] and [y] by&nbsp;</b></span><b><span style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">by
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 solely to show how such phrases are inserted, so that such sentences can run on.&nbsp; Lawyers will also use the word &quot;such&quot; in a somewhat futile effort to indicate that the word following (in this case, &quot;sentences&quot;) was already used in the sentence and is being
 referred to again with the same meaning.&nbsp; These drafting habits unfortunately make following the main thread of a sentence increasingly difficult. They also force awkward phrasing of the inserted clauses, since these clauses have to be drafted as referential
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 8:38 PM, Trang Nguyen &lt;<a href="mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org" target="_blank">trang.nguyen@icann.org</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">The ICANN restated articles of incorporation is not on the critical path so we are able to accommodate an extension of the public comment period. The close of
 the public comment period has been extended to 13 July.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From:
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<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, July 6, 2016 at 2:24 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Greg Shatan &lt;<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>&quot;Gregory, Holly&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:holly.gregory@sidley.com" target="_blank">holly.gregory@sidley.com</a>&gt;, Thomas Rickert &lt;<a href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net" target="_blank">thomas@rickert.net</a>&gt;, Mathieu Weill &lt;<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr" target="_blank">mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx" target="_blank">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx" target="_blank">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&gt;, Accountability Cross Community &lt;<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>&gt;,
 Bernard Turcotte &lt;<a href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com" target="_blank">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>&gt;, Trang Nguyen &lt;<a href="mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org" target="_blank">trang.nguyen@icann.org</a>&gt;, Yuko Green &lt;<a href="mailto:yuko.green@icann.org" target="_blank">yuko.green@icann.org</a>&gt;
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<b>Subject: </b>Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 the CCWG before we file it, Im not sure if a 24-48hr delay in the filing of the CCWG comment would have a major impact downstream in the timelines, I have cc’d Trang and Yuko who may be able to respond to that.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 correct first time and to do that we nee to do it with a full set of inputs and considerations by the CCWG members and I don’t feel we have this yet. I know that we are working to tight deadlines, but we need to make sure that we do this right.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Greg Shatan &lt;<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday 6 July 2016 at 21:45<br>
<b>To: </b>James Gannon &lt;<a href="mailto:james@cyberinvasion.net" target="_blank">james@cyberinvasion.net</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc: </b>&quot;Gregory, Holly&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:holly.gregory@sidley.com" target="_blank">holly.gregory@sidley.com</a>&gt;, Thomas Rickert &lt;<a href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net" target="_blank">thomas@rickert.net</a>&gt;, Mathieu Weill &lt;<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr" target="_blank">mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a>&gt;,
 &quot;<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx" target="_blank">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx" target="_blank">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&gt;, Accountability Cross Community &lt;<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>&gt;,
 Bernard Turcotte &lt;<a href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com" target="_blank">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<u>requirement</u>&nbsp;that a determination of the global public interest <u>must</u>&nbsp;take place.&nbsp; We have not asked for such a requirement and we have not specified any such requirement, which would render this statement nebulous, ambiguous and undefined.&nbsp; As
 currently drafted, <i>if</i>&nbsp;a determination of the global public interest takes place it will be done by the multistakeholder community using a bottom-up multistakeholder process, but there is (properly) no language
<u>requiring</u>&nbsp;that such a determination be made.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<u>requires</u>&nbsp;the initiation of a process to determine the global public interest, that should either be a part of Work Stream 2 or a huge implementation item&nbsp;for Work Stream 1.&nbsp; As far as I can see, it is neither -- which further proves that changing &quot;may&quot;
 to &quot;shall&quot; goes beyond the recommendations of the CCWG.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 a non-profit corporation files Articles of Organization rather than Articles of Incorporation).&nbsp; As our counsel pointed out on the last call, the California official form for Articles of Incorporation uses the term &quot;organized.&quot; (See attached) &nbsp;It is a best
 practice to stick closely to the official language provided by the jurisdiction -- here it is &quot;organized.&quot; &nbsp;This is demonstrated in model California Articles of Incorporation prepared by Public Counsel, a pro bono law firm, and available online (see attached
 or <a href="http://www.publiccounsel.org/publications?id=0059" target="_blank">http://www.publiccounsel.org/publications?id=0059</a>).&nbsp; It would be far preferable if we were to accept the clarification that &quot;organized&quot; is what's used in this circumstance,
 rather than to recommend a change that is at best meaningless and at worst creates the potential for confusion (since one always looks for meaning in any change, and confusion could fill the void created by the meaninglessness of this change).&nbsp; To paraphrase
 Shakespeare, I don't think the confusion is in the document, it is in ourselves (or at least in some of us) -- and it would be better for us to adjust our understanding of the document, rather than to adjust the document to suit our misunderstanding.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 review the language.&nbsp; We do not justify our quasi-recommendations of changes, other than by saying that we are confused by the word &quot;organized&quot; and by demonstrating that we are confused about what is permissive and what is required.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">&lt;<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org</a>&gt; on behalf of &quot;Gregory, Holly&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:holly.gregory@sidley.com" target="_blank">holly.gregory@sidley.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday 6 July 2016 at 20:32<br>
<b>To: </b>Thomas Rickert &lt;<a href="mailto:thomas@rickert.net" target="_blank">thomas@rickert.net</a>&gt;, Mathieu Weill &lt;<a href="mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr" target="_blank">mathieu.weill@afnic.fr</a>&gt;, &quot;<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx" target="_blank">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&quot;
 &lt;<a href="mailto:leonfelipe@sanchez.mx" target="_blank">leonfelipe@sanchez.mx</a>&gt;, Accountability Cross Community &lt;<a href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org" target="_blank">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a>&gt;, Bernard Turcotte &lt;<a href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com" target="_blank">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 Sidley and/or Adler to comment on this before you post it.&nbsp; We will not do so unless instructed to.&nbsp; Holly</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bernard Turcotte<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 06, 2016 3:27 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Accountability Cross Community<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CCWG-ACCT] CCWG-Accountability - Draft Comment for Public Consultation on Articles of Incorporation (AOC)</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">Please find attached the draft comment to the ICANN public consultation on the Articles of Incorporation from the leadership.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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