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    <p><font face="Verdana">Dear All</font></p>
    <p><font face="Verdana">Enclosed is the complete document of my
        dissenting opinion, which now includes part 2 as well (with some
        modifications in part 1) as a single document. Please ignore the
      </font><font face="Verdana">earlier submitted </font><font
        face="Verdana">document. <br>
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    <p><font face="Verdana">This is for CCWG's consideration. Also for
        jurisdiction sub-group, assuming that it continues to function.</font></p>
    <p><font face="Verdana">Best regards</font></p>
    <p><font face="Verdana">parminder </font><br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On Sunday 15 October 2017 11:51 PM,
      parminder wrote:<br>
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      <p><font face="Verdana">Dear All</font></p>
      <p><font face="Verdana">I fully support the excellent "statement
          of Brazil", which makes the required point very well. The
          sub-group should consider the draft recommendations made in
          the statement. In default, the CCWG should directly consider
          them.</font></p>
      <p><font face="Verdana">My own dissenting opinion is enclosed. It
          is in two parts, part 1 is about what was the group's mandate
          to do but it failed to do. This part first expresses support
          to Brazil's statement, and then makes additional points,
          detailing how there has been a miscarriage of due process, and
          thus justifying why Brazil's draft recs must be considered, in
          the required elaborate manner. Part one is enclosed herewith.</font></p>
      <p><font face="Verdana">Part two will present  some comments on
          and disagreements with regard to the two sets of draft recs
          that have been submitted on the sub-group's behalf. I am still
          to write them, so allow me to submit them in the next 12
          hours, which will still be the weekend in some parts of the
          world, and thus within the deadline I hope.</font></p>
      <p><font face="Verdana">Best regards, parminder <br>
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      <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On Sunday 15 October 2017 06:43 AM,
        Thiago Braz Jardim Oliveira wrote:<br>
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            <div style="font-size: 13.3333px;">On behalf of the
              Brazilian Government, I hereby submit the "Statement of
              Brazil" and its annex, which are to be annexed to the
              draft report of the jurisdiction subgroup, submitted on 11
              October 2017, for consideration by the CCWG plenary.</div>
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            <div style="font-size: 13.3333px;">Best regards,</div>
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            <div style="font-size: 13.3333px;">Thiago</div>
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                size="2" face="Tahoma" color="#000000"><b>De:</b> <a
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                [<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
                  href="mailto:ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org"
                  moz-do-not-send="true">ws2-jurisdiction-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                em nome de Greg Shatan [<a
                  class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
                  href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"
                  moz-do-not-send="true">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>]<br>
                <b>Enviado:</b> quinta-feira, 12 de outubro de 2017
                23:29<br>
                <b>Para:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
                  href="mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org"
                  moz-do-not-send="true">accountability-cross-community@icann.org</a><br>
                <b>Cc:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
                  href="mailto:acct-staff@icann.org"
                  moz-do-not-send="true">acct-staff@icann.org</a>;
                ws2-jurisdiction<br>
                <b>Assunto:</b> Re: [Ws2-jurisdiction] Jurisdiction
                Subgroup Draft Report for CCWG-Accountability Plenary
                Review<br>
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                <div class="gmail_default"
                  style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div>
                <div class="gmail_default"
                  style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br>
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                <div class="gmail_default"
                  style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">One of the
                  Subgroup members pointed out a minor editing error in
                  the document.  On pages 13-14, there were several
                  mentions of the RAA, when in fact the language quoted
                  and discussed was from the <font color="#000000"><span
                      style="font-family:arial,sans-serif"><span
                        style="font-size:12pt; line-height:115%;
                        font-family:Calibri,sans-serif" lang="EN">ICANN
                        Terms and Conditions for Registrar Accreditation
                        Application.  (The reference was correct in the
                        Executive Summary.)  This has now been fixed in
                        the attached.</span></span></font></div>
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                <div class="gmail_default"
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                    color="#000000">Greg </font></div>
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                <div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Oct 12, 2017 at 10:10
                  PM, Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"> &lt;<a
                      href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"
                      target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span>
                  wrote:<br>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div>
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                      <div class="gmail_default"
                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Some
                        minor formatting errors crept into the Report
                        when it was converted from Word to PDF.  A new
                        PDF of the report is attached. I've checked each
                        page to confirm that the formatting errors were
                        resolved.</div>
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                      <div class="gmail_default"
                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Thank you
                        to Jorge Cancio for catching this problem!</div>
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                          <div class="gmail_default"
                            style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div>
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                            <div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Oct 11,
                              2017 at 7:53 PM, Greg Shatan <span
                                dir="ltr"> &lt;<a
                                  href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"
                                  target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span>
                              wrote:<br>
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                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">All,</div>
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                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I
                                    am pleased to submit the Draft
                                    Report from the Jurisdiction
                                    Subgroup for consideration by the
                                    CCWG-Accountability Plenary.</div>
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                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">It
                                    is my understanding that a minority
                                    viewpoint is expected to be
                                    submitted.  In the interests of
                                    time, this will be submitted to the
                                    Plenary separately from the Draft
                                    Report.</div>
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                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><i
                                      style="font-size:12.8px">During
                                      the preparation of the OFAC
                                      Recommendation, the Subgroup
                                      considered an email where a
                                      registrar declined to do business
                                      with a potential reseller, based
                                      on the registrar’s policy of not
                                      doing business with people with
                                      Iranian passports.  The Subgroup
                                      also learned that this registrar,
                                      which had been registering domains
                                      for a number of Iranian nationals,
                                      refused to continue to do business
                                      with them.  The Subgroup has
                                      concluded that, to the extent
                                      these instances are related to
                                      OFAC, the concerns raised by these
                                      instances are adequately covered
                                      in the Recommendation already
                                      without any additional changes. 
                                      This is not in any way a comment
                                      on the validity of these
                                      particular concerns.  The Subgroup
                                      will consider creating "<span
                                        class="m_-1922489801139394888m_-1211245373740868748gmail-il">stress</span> <span
class="m_-1922489801139394888m_-1211245373740868748gmail-il">tests</span>"
                                      based on these scenarios.</i><br>
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                                  <div
                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span
                                      style="font-size:12.8px">I look
                                      forward to the Plenary's reading
                                      of the Draft Report.</span></div>
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                                  <div
                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span
                                      style="font-size:12.8px">Best
                                      regards,</span></div>
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                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span
                                      style="font-size:12.8px"><br>
                                    </span></div>
                                  <div
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                                      style="font-size:12.8px">Greg
                                      Shatan</span></div>
                                  <div
                                    style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><span
                                      style="font-size:12.8px"><i>Rapporteur</i></span></div>
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